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on the other shore the waters are crystal green unlike these so blue sun sparkles rubies and mauve birds sing on the wing into plum tinged nights on the other side dark shadows dance in sunshine through the blue green days rainbows touch the ground and butterflies trail fragrance in the land of dreams

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Judy Ball

Date: 4/15/2022 3:57:00 PM

Beautiful Evelyn as always. Love this. God Bless and Happy Easter to you and yours. JB

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/15/2022 4:37:00 PM

Thank you for your inspiring remarks, Judy. You also have my warmest wishes for a Happy Easter, Evelyn

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/13/2022 2:30:00 PM

Let's see now. If the reader is on the other side... Oh, I see! You get there (to the other side) by REACHING your reader, as you did me! Kudos, Gershon

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/13/2022 4:23:00 PM

I am so happy to have made the connection. Thank you very much. Happy Easter, Evelyn

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/13/2022 9:28:00 AM

WoW! Evelyn, Your string of haikus compliment the painting very well. Great job. Have a nice day-Alexis

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/13/2022 4:25:00 PM

Thank you for your heartwarming remarks, Alexis. Enjoy your day as well, Evelyn