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on the other shore
the waters are crystal green
unlike these so blue

sun sparkles rubies
and mauve birds sing on the wing
into plum tinged nights

on the other side
dark shadows dance in sunshine
through the blue green days

rainbows touch the ground
and butterflies trail fragrance
in the land of dreams

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Judy Ball

Date: 4/15/2022 3:57:00 PM

Beautiful Evelyn as always. Love this. God Bless and Happy Easter to you and yours. JB

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/15/2022 4:37:00 PM

Thank you for your inspiring remarks, Judy. You also have my warmest wishes for a Happy Easter, Evelyn

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/13/2022 2:30:00 PM

Let's see now. If the reader is on the other side... Oh, I see! You get there (to the other side) by REACHING your reader, as you did me! Kudos, Gershon

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/13/2022 4:23:00 PM

I am so happy to have made the connection. Thank you very much. Happy Easter, Evelyn

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/13/2022 9:28:00 AM

WoW! Evelyn, Your string of haikus compliment the painting very well. Great job. Have a nice day-Alexis

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/13/2022 4:25:00 PM

Thank you for your heartwarming remarks, Alexis. Enjoy your day as well, Evelyn