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A Better Day

Timid dawn emerged

The torch of Man's hope is lit

Dreams started their march,

Humanity rejoyces 

A better day is assured!









© Demetrios Trifiatis
        31 May 2021

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Kim Merryman

Date: 5/31/2021 5:00:00 PM

An uplifting, positive message in your tanka, Demetrios! Blessings, Kim M

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/31/2021 6:30:00 PM

Thank you so much, dearest Kim, for your delightful visit and comment. Blessings.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 5/31/2021 10:07:00 AM

I loved your creative spelling, so appropriate for this tanka, Demetrios. Very enjoyable read!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/31/2021 12:28:00 PM

Thank you so much for your appreciation, my dearest friend, L MILTON. Blessings.

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/31/2021 6:07:00 AM

We should always maintain the flame of hope glowing in our lives because that is a source of inspiration. Hope should provide a great deal of joy, as it helps us realize our dreams. Have a great day, dear Demetrios

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/31/2021 12:26:00 PM

Yes, my friend Lasaad, we should, otherwise, humanity will suffer catastrophic consequences. Thank you for your lovely visit and comment. Blessings.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/31/2021 6:07:00 AM

Very nice, inspiring poem Demetrios. :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/31/2021 12:23:00 PM

Thank you so much, my dearest Heidi, for your kind comment. Hugs xxx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/31/2021 4:59:00 AM

Much joy in this message of a better day my friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/31/2021 5:27:00 AM

Hope should always bring much joy for it provides wings to our dreams, my dearest friend, Vijay. Thank you for your precious visit and comment. Blessings.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 5/31/2021 4:57:00 AM

Lovely, Demetrios…….linspiring words to start the day. Best, SuZ

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/31/2021 5:25:00 AM

Glad you liked it, my dearest friend, Suzanne! I thank you for your gracious visit and comment! Hugs

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/31/2021 1:11:00 AM

So true Demetrios, we should always keep the flame of hope burning in our lives. Enjoy your week. Tom

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/31/2021 5:02:00 AM

Very true, my dearest friend, Tom. Humanity should keep hoping and working for a better tomorrow. God bless us all. Thank you for your lovely visit and comment!

A Better Day

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