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A Belief In Us

Fragile humanity. Haunted by a world of divisive 'isms' and phobia, Struggling to find a voice, aching to live. The gentle embrace of a child. Sweet hope takes wing. *'isms' - things like racism, sexism, consumerism, cannibalism... the list can be extensive. 2.12.2016

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Darren White

Date: 12/7/2016 10:05:00 PM

Beautiful Cinquain! Both the message and the form are my favourites in this contest. Congratulations on your placement

Leileah Kasperyan
Date: 12/8/2016 4:18:00 AM

Aw shucks, thank you Darren :)

Doug Vinson

Date: 12/7/2016 10:53:00 AM

This is a great poem, Leileah. As a race, as groups, and as individuals, I think we are all haunted to some extent.

Leileah Kasperyan
Date: 12/8/2016 4:17:00 AM

Thank you very much Doug. We are indeed haunted, but thank goodness for hope!

Rainbow Promise

Date: 12/2/2016 1:31:00 PM

Humanity could sometimes be "fragile" mentally and emotionally and decisions may often lead to phobias. Embracing the mind of a child, simply gives hope. You caused much to be pictured in this short poem.

Leileah Kasperyan
Date: 12/3/2016 2:37:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Rainbow! :)