A Bed Sheet Stained With Chocolate

Jane went out with friends
She spent the evening 
After a long drive
She was very tired
Sleeping through the night
In the morn she awoke
With a big surprise
Her pj's had stains
All over her sleep wear
The color was brown
She sniffed the brown stain
From the stained bed sheet
It smelled like chocolate
On her pyjamas
Dried in a big crust.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Obare Avatar
November 11, 2019 at 3:25 AM
The chocolate must have been enjoyable I bet. Hope she will clean the mess a way. Nice piece.
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 11, 2019 at 7:16 AM
Hello Lamech Obare,Chocolate is enjoyable.She has to clean the mess or she sleeps in dirty bed. Have a nice day my friend. Darlene
Mcgee Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 5:48 PM
Hi Darlene, This is a fun poem and made me chuckle...I love chocolate!
Marine Avatar
May 12, 2019 at 4:05 PM
This brought a big smile to my face, Darlene - It made me remember when I fell asleep while chewing gum, when I was a little girl. It got into my long hair, and my mother had to cut some hair off...Terrible mess. I can just imagine how Jane felt! (((HUGS)))
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 12, 2019 at 5:07 PM
Hello Aqua Marine,Jan felt horrible! All her clothes were a mess. Gum is worse I never had gum stuck in my hair. Have a nice evening my friend. Thank you fr the lovely comment.
Kiser Avatar
March 1, 2019 at 6:54 PM
That's the best way to enjoy chocolate; just dive right in! Good poem.
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 7:11 AM
Hello M.L. Kiser, yes that is the only way toenjoy chocolate. I like the dark the only one i eat. have a nice day my friend.
Michael Avatar
February 28, 2019 at 6:32 PM
It must have smelled good...otherwise in a mess...entertaining write...
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 7:16 AM
Hello Micheal, yes chocolate does smell good. But on a bed sheet stained with it. have a nice day my friend.
Mcguire Avatar
February 28, 2019 at 1:47 AM
Great poem! I myself love dark chocolate with a stout drink once in a while. So I can image a night when too much of both were consumed and the chocolate ended up in bed. Perhaps a bedmate had chocolate their PJ's too. :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 28, 2019 at 7:02 AM
Hello Timothy McGurie, dark chocolate is the only kind I eat. I do not like the others. Jane was tired her chocolate bar dripped onto the bed sheet, and her pj's got stained. have a nice day my friend.
One Avatar
February 27, 2019 at 3:27 AM
Oh dear.. have a nice day Darlene..
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 27, 2019 at 7:27 AM
Hello Silent One, that is what you get ware checked. Staiened Pj's Have a nice day my friend. Thank you forthe lovely comment.
Gragg Avatar
February 26, 2019 at 6:07 PM
A midnight snack gone astray?
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 27, 2019 at 7:28 AM
Hello Charles, yes a mighty stain tha did not get checked out. Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.
Cunningham Avatar
February 26, 2019 at 2:23 PM
Sounds like she might have had too much wine then dozed off eating chocolate. Tom.
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 27, 2019 at 7:33 AM
Hello Tom ,yes that would be my guess, having too much to drink. have a nice day my friend. Thank you for the lovely comment.
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