A Bed Sheet Stained With Chocolate

Jane went out with friends
She spent the evening 
After a long drive
She was very tired
Sleeping through the night
In the morn she awoke
With a big surprise
Her pj's had stains
All over her sleep wear
The color was brown
She sniffed the brown stain
From the stained bed sheet
It smelled like chocolate
On her pyjamas
Dried in a big crust.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 11/11/2019 3:25:00 AM
The chocolate must have been enjoyable I bet. Hope she will clean the mess a way. Nice piece.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/11/2019 7:16:00 AM
Hello Lamech Obare,Chocolate is enjoyable.She has to clean the mess or she sleeps in dirty bed. Have a nice day my friend. Darlene
Date: 6/7/2019 5:48:00 PM
Hi Darlene, This is a fun poem and made me chuckle...I love chocolate!
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Date: 5/12/2019 4:05:00 PM
This brought a big smile to my face, Darlene - It made me remember when I fell asleep while chewing gum, when I was a little girl. It got into my long hair, and my mother had to cut some hair off...Terrible mess. I can just imagine how Jane felt! (((HUGS)))
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/12/2019 5:07:00 PM
Hello Aqua Marine,Jan felt horrible! All her clothes were a mess. Gum is worse I never had gum stuck in my hair. Have a nice evening my friend. Thank you fr the lovely comment.
Date: 3/1/2019 6:54:00 PM
That's the best way to enjoy chocolate; just dive right in! Good poem.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/2/2019 7:11:00 AM
Hello M.L. Kiser, yes that is the only way toenjoy chocolate. I like the dark the only one i eat. have a nice day my friend.
Date: 2/28/2019 6:32:00 PM
It must have smelled good...otherwise in a mess...entertaining write...
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/2/2019 7:16:00 AM
Hello Micheal, yes chocolate does smell good. But on a bed sheet stained with it. have a nice day my friend.
Date: 2/28/2019 1:47:00 AM
Great poem! I myself love dark chocolate with a stout drink once in a while. So I can image a night when too much of both were consumed and the chocolate ended up in bed. Perhaps a bedmate had chocolate their PJ's too. :)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/28/2019 7:02:00 AM
Hello Timothy McGurie, dark chocolate is the only kind I eat. I do not like the others. Jane was tired her chocolate bar dripped onto the bed sheet, and her pj's got stained. have a nice day my friend.
Date: 2/27/2019 3:27:00 AM
Oh dear.. have a nice day Darlene..
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/27/2019 7:27:00 AM
Hello Silent One, that is what you get ware checked. Staiened Pj's Have a nice day my friend. Thank you forthe lovely comment.
Date: 2/26/2019 6:07:00 PM
A midnight snack gone astray?
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/27/2019 7:28:00 AM
Hello Charles, yes a mighty stain tha did not get checked out. Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.
Date: 2/26/2019 2:23:00 PM
Sounds like she might have had too much wine then dozed off eating chocolate. Tom.
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Date: 2/27/2019 7:33:00 AM
Hello Tom ,yes that would be my guess, having too much to drink. have a nice day my friend. Thank you for the lovely comment.
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