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A Bed Sheet Stained With Chocolate

Jane went out with friends She spent the evening After a long drive She was very tired Sleeping through the night In the morn she awoke With a big surprise Her pj's had stains All over her sleep wear The color was brown She sniffed the brown stain From the stained bed sheet It smelled like chocolate On her pyjamas Dried in a big crust.

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Lamech Obare

Date: 11/11/2019 3:25:00 AM

The chocolate must have been enjoyable I bet. Hope she will clean the mess a way. Nice piece.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/11/2019 7:16:00 AM

Hello Lamech Obare,Chocolate is enjoyable.She has to clean the mess or she sleeps in dirty bed. Have a nice day my friend. Darlene

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 6/7/2019 5:48:00 PM

Hi Darlene, This is a fun poem and made me chuckle...I love chocolate!

Aqua Marine

Date: 5/12/2019 4:05:00 PM

This brought a big smile to my face, Darlene - It made me remember when I fell asleep while chewing gum, when I was a little girl. It got into my long hair, and my mother had to cut some hair off...Terrible mess. I can just imagine how Jane felt! (((HUGS)))

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/12/2019 5:07:00 PM

Hello Aqua Marine,Jan felt horrible! All her clothes were a mess. Gum is worse I never had gum stuck in my hair. Have a nice evening my friend. Thank you fr the lovely comment.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 3/1/2019 6:54:00 PM

That's the best way to enjoy chocolate; just dive right in! Good poem.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/2/2019 7:11:00 AM

Hello M.L. Kiser, yes that is the only way toenjoy chocolate. I like the dark the only one i eat. have a nice day my friend.

Arturo Michael

Date: 2/28/2019 6:32:00 PM

It must have smelled good...otherwise in a mess...entertaining write...

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/2/2019 7:16:00 AM

Hello Micheal, yes chocolate does smell good. But on a bed sheet stained with it. have a nice day my friend.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 2/28/2019 1:47:00 AM

Great poem! I myself love dark chocolate with a stout drink once in a while. So I can image a night when too much of both were consumed and the chocolate ended up in bed. Perhaps a bedmate had chocolate their PJ's too. :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/28/2019 7:02:00 AM

Hello Timothy McGurie, dark chocolate is the only kind I eat. I do not like the others. Jane was tired her chocolate bar dripped onto the bed sheet, and her pj's got stained. have a nice day my friend.

Silent One

Date: 2/27/2019 3:27:00 AM

Oh dear.. have a nice day Darlene..

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/27/2019 7:27:00 AM

Hello Silent One, that is what you get ware checked. Staiened Pj's Have a nice day my friend. Thank you forthe lovely comment.

Charles Gragg

Date: 2/26/2019 6:07:00 PM

A midnight snack gone astray?

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/27/2019 7:28:00 AM

Hello Charles, yes a mighty stain tha did not get checked out. Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/26/2019 2:23:00 PM

Sounds like she might have had too much wine then dozed off eating chocolate. Tom.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/27/2019 7:33:00 AM

Hello Tom ,yes that would be my guess, having too much to drink. have a nice day my friend. Thank you for the lovely comment.