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A Beauty Held Inside Eyes

Avast a beauty held inside. In fragile hands and soft lingering eyes. a supple smile burning as if a star for one who gazes through lenses. A galaxy of colors swirling and throbbing with electrical pulses beating blood through a maze of veins. Travel through hedges of high and low and run in circles before you know you are lost, lost within a heart. Secretive and full. Hopeful and despair filled. A contradiction of rigid gentleness. A beauty lost within closed eyes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/1/2014 1:06:00 PM
Your poem also holds beauty inside. This is a nice write.
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Date: 2/28/2014 9:11:00 AM
Jay!!!! Hey stranger!!! =D How have you been doing?? This piece MELTED me! Those last 2 lines are riveting & poignant in its heartbeats. Wonderfully done!
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Date: 2/21/2014 1:35:00 PM
Closed eyes can allow us to see where the soul flies to meet with a love whose voice is natural and undoubting. This poem is a hot beauty of genuine desire. It swells my heart happily. Contradictions lead to truth. J.A.B.
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