A Beautiful Poetic Soup Shadorma

[ Standard Contest : Write a Beautiful Shadorma
Sponsor: Constance la France
Placing : Second ]
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“Actually, if you don’t dip into the Soup, you might not meet Shakespeare and he won’t be able to taste your verses.” Poet

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This soup tastes 
like a fancy hat
bewitching 
alluring 
beauties and beasts swirling heat
pulchritudinous

Slick smooth soup
papyrus inky 
taste chuckling
lyrical 
luscious sages engaging
scripting evolving 

Nourishes 
Shakespeare’s ladle dips
readers gape
poets stirring 
dramatically press keys
flourish stanzas bold
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Poteet Avatar
April 3, 2026 at 7:55 AM
Congratulations, Ghairo. A unique piece which brings life to your metaphors...love the first one "Soup" as a fancy hat and Shakespeare's ladle fits so very well. Had he a computer, (for speed) could he have written so much more?? Enjoyed your shadorma very much.
Daniels Avatar
April 3, 2026 at 8:00 AM
ThkU for read, Reason. Yes, imagine what they could have done with the internet. And imagine what our great grandchildren will think when they read these comments we make today. Lol. Have a goodie Easter Weekend. X.
Goldsmith Avatar
April 2, 2026 at 2:16 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful/creative "A Beautiful Poetic Soup Shadorma" write/quote. Great Ending... Have a Beautiful/Blessed Easter writing away.............
Hind Avatar
March 23, 2026 at 5:56 PM
You did wonders with this form. So much personality, Ghairo <3 xxoo
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