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A Beautiful Love

A beautiful day, beautiful is time,
When I have you lay by my side.
A beautiful feel, a beautiful rhyme,
Just to look into your eyes,
And lie by your side.
Never felt so better in life before,
Nothing would feel better than hold you,
In my arms forevermore.
Time and time I felt,
To kneel over and hold your hands.
I don't know what is right and light.
But one thing is sure and very pretty sure,
I will love you all my life.
A~D

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Robin Davis

Date: 9/20/2013 10:21:00 PM

this is so beautiful and full of love and desire. the emotion and feelings can be felt from beginning to end. nice job

Allen Danie
Date: 11/12/2013 3:17:00 AM

Thank you Robin for the review. A~D :)

Skat A

Date: 9/4/2013 6:30:00 PM

amazing it is Allen, congrats....SKAT

Allen Danie
Date: 9/9/2013 9:56:00 PM

Thank you for the review SKAT. :) A~D

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/4/2013 8:07:00 AM

Allen, , congratulations in Nathan's any poem contest... always~ Linda

Allen Danie
Date: 9/9/2013 9:55:00 PM

thank you Linda.. :) A~D

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 8/29/2013 8:48:00 AM

Awww....so wonderful to be in love! A delightful and sweet read. Hugs

Allen Danie
Date: 8/31/2013 9:00:00 AM

Thank you Cecilia for the support :) A~D

Christopher Michaels

Date: 8/28/2013 2:23:00 AM

A beautiful day, beautiful is time, When I have you lay by my side. A beautiful feel, a beautiful rhyme Great choices of words!!!!!! WOW Great poem love take time but i see you are Happy

Allen Danie
Date: 8/28/2013 10:06:00 AM

Ya I am happy. Thank you for the support Chris.. :) A~D

Yadhu Babu

Date: 8/27/2013 2:11:00 AM

LOVE 4 EVER

Allen Danie
Date: 8/27/2013 3:12:00 AM

yaa thats true.. :) A~D

Vinayak Pratap

Date: 8/27/2013 2:05:00 AM

NICE WORK MY FRIEND DO READ MINE AND TELL ME HW IT IS

Allen Danie
Date: 8/27/2013 3:14:00 AM

thank you vinayak....will look into it :) A~D

Debbie Duncan

Date: 8/27/2013 12:06:00 AM

romance, romance, romance ;}

Allen Danie
Date: 8/27/2013 10:03:00 PM

Who doesnt have one....have a great day.. :) A~D

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 8/26/2013 2:43:00 PM

Nice and romantic write! Thank you for your kind comment on my poem, "Cheers and Whistles".

Allen Danie
Date: 8/26/2013 5:17:00 PM

Thank you Caroline. And your welcome. A~D :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/25/2013 11:53:00 PM

hello A~D, love is lovely and I love all the wonder games my heart plays when my heart beats to the perfect rhythm and rhyme when I'm laying with my soul mate. Your poem is a beaut, and lights up the word love..... hugs.... linda

Allen Danie
Date: 8/26/2013 2:05:00 AM

Now thats one way of lighting me up to write....a poetic comment.. :) A~D

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 8/25/2013 7:50:00 AM

A very pretty poem, Allen. Enjoyed!

Allen Danie
Date: 8/25/2013 10:44:00 PM

Thank you Harrell... :) A~D

Just That Archaic Poet

Date: 8/24/2013 10:41:00 AM

Ohhhh, Allen, you made me swoon with that last line; positively swoon. What a beautiful verse to end the piece. I adore this piece, and it's going into my faves :)

Allen Danie
Date: 8/24/2013 11:35:00 PM

Thanks friend for the word of praise. Gives me the encouragement to write more. :) A~D