Allen Danie Poet Free verse

A Beautiful Love

A beautiful day, beautiful is time,
When I have you lay by my side.
A beautiful feel, a beautiful rhyme,
Just to look into your eyes,
And lie by your side.
Never felt so better in life before,
Nothing would feel better than hold you,
In my arms forevermore.
Time and time I felt,
To kneel over and hold your hands.
I don't know what is right and light.
But one thing is sure and very pretty sure,
I will love you all my life.
A~D

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Robin Davis September 20, 2013 at 10:21 PM this is so beautiful and full of love and desire. the emotion and feelings can be felt from beginning to end. nice job Allen Danie November 12, 2013 at 3:17 AM Thank you Robin for the review. A~D :)

Skat A September 4, 2013 at 6:30 PM amazing it is Allen, congrats....SKAT Allen Danie September 9, 2013 at 9:56 PM Thank you for the review SKAT. :) A~D

Poet Destroyer A September 4, 2013 at 8:07 AM Allen, , congratulations in Nathan's any poem contest... always~ Linda Allen Danie September 9, 2013 at 9:55 PM thank you Linda.. :) A~D

Cecilia Macfarlane August 29, 2013 at 8:48 AM Awww....so wonderful to be in love! A delightful and sweet read. Hugs Allen Danie August 31, 2013 at 9:00 AM Thank you Cecilia for the support :) A~D

Christopher Michaels August 28, 2013 at 2:23 AM A beautiful day, beautiful is time, When I have you lay by my side. A beautiful feel, a beautiful rhyme Great choices of words!!!!!! WOW Great poem love take time but i see you are Happy Allen Danie August 28, 2013 at 10:06 AM Ya I am happy. Thank you for the support Chris.. :) A~D

Yadhu Babu August 27, 2013 at 2:11 AM LOVE 4 EVER Allen Danie August 27, 2013 at 3:12 AM yaa thats true.. :) A~D

Vinayak Pratap August 27, 2013 at 2:05 AM NICE WORK MY FRIEND DO READ MINE AND TELL ME HW IT IS Allen Danie August 27, 2013 at 3:14 AM thank you vinayak....will look into it :) A~D

Debbie Duncan August 27, 2013 at 12:06 AM romance, romance, romance ;} Allen Danie August 27, 2013 at 10:03 PM Who doesnt have one....have a great day.. :) A~D

Caroline Cécile Delacroix August 26, 2013 at 2:43 PM Nice and romantic write! Thank you for your kind comment on my poem, "Cheers and Whistles". Allen Danie August 26, 2013 at 5:17 PM Thank you Caroline. And your welcome. A~D :)

Poet Destroyer A August 25, 2013 at 11:53 PM hello A~D, love is lovely and I love all the wonder games my heart plays when my heart beats to the perfect rhythm and rhyme when I'm laying with my soul mate. Your poem is a beaut, and lights up the word love..... hugs.... linda Allen Danie August 26, 2013 at 2:05 AM Now thats one way of lighting me up to write....a poetic comment.. :) A~D

Toquyen Harrell August 25, 2013 at 7:50 AM A very pretty poem, Allen. Enjoyed! Allen Danie August 25, 2013 at 10:44 PM Thank you Harrell... :) A~D

Just That Archaic Poet August 24, 2013 at 10:41 AM Ohhhh, Allen, you made me swoon with that last line; positively swoon. What a beautiful verse to end the piece. I adore this piece, and it's going into my faves :) Allen Danie August 24, 2013 at 11:35 PM Thanks friend for the word of praise. Gives me the encouragement to write more. :) A~D

Anne-Lise Andresen August 24, 2013 at 5:07 AM - Thank you for your beautiful poem! - Well written, poet friend! - Have a great weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Allen Danie August 24, 2013 at 11:31 PM You to have a great weekend !! A~D

Vinayak Pratap August 24, 2013 at 4:33 AM WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!! Allen Danie August 24, 2013 at 11:29 PM Thnx man !! :) A~D