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A Beautiful Flower

A Beautiful Flower Thoughts Cascading through A timeless piece One can learn to understand it's fullest creation First a seed then the soil An ever increasing pull through the ground Sound the alarm Vanquished from the worms that eat With time a sprout then the light of illumination A pulse of radiance sought after colors of deep penetrating taste An explosion of excellence Red, yellow and white The sun beats upon the fullness of it's brevity Solace has replaced the film in front of the natural eye The vast nature's beckoning call asunder We awake to take in it's priceless beauty A challenge to be set free is a question of time

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Date: 1/19/2017 6:28:00 PM
Was there supposed to be a picture in that upper space? No matter, your description made the picture. Enjoyed it very much.
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Date: 1/19/2017 4:42:00 PM
Very vivid descriptiveness in this writing. Just one suggestion: "it's" in your fourth, thirteenth, and sixteenth lines does not require an apostrophe. There is no genitive case ( abbreviation of "it is") present there. Nevertheless, this is a quality writing.
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