A Beautiful Flower

A Beautiful Flower
 




 

 




Thoughts
 Cascading through
 A timeless piece
 One can learn to understand it's fullest creation
 First a seed then the soil
 An ever increasing pull through the ground
 Sound the alarm
 Vanquished from the worms that eat
 With time a sprout then the light of illumination
 A pulse of radiance sought after colors of deep penetrating taste
 An explosion of excellence
 Red, yellow and white
 The sun beats upon the fullness of it's brevity
 Solace has replaced the film in front of the natural eye
 The vast nature's beckoning call asunder
 We awake to take in it's priceless beauty
 A challenge to be set free is a question of time

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 1/19/2017 6:28:00 PM
Was there supposed to be a picture in that upper space? No matter, your description made the picture. Enjoyed it very much.
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Date: 1/19/2017 4:42:00 PM
Very vivid descriptiveness in this writing. Just one suggestion: "it's" in your fourth, thirteenth, and sixteenth lines does not require an apostrophe. There is no genitive case ( abbreviation of "it is") present there. Nevertheless, this is a quality writing.
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