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A Beautiful Day In Spring

Out of the dark, a lambent, lovely day has dawned In silvery brilliance the early morning is drowned In the sapphire sky, the sun has appeared on his diurnal shift Over the firmament the vagrant clouds aimlessly drift Pigeons nestle with their fledglings in the eaves Bright sunshine seeps down through the leaves Flocks of birds take on wings for their morning flight Like diminutive dots they eventually disappear out of sight All around is seen spring’s mesmerizing presence The dormant bulbs have sprung back with a vengeance They bear blossoms of pink, purple, yellow and white Flashing before every watchful eye a spectacular sight Like a bride, the Earth is clad in her silky emerald dress Around honey laden florets, the bees restlessly buzz Every heart overflows in cheer with no tension’s trace On every face, smile shuttles from lips to eyes In the wind I hear the lilts of a forgotten melody From a woodland nearby, a lone bird sounds its parody It seems Heaven has flung all its treasures down And the Earth appears regally decked in floral crown Within me, all of a sudden, I sense a divine elation Erasing from my sullen soul, all traces of vexation Through every fiber of my being, the waves of joy rise And my spirit leaps out in ecstasy to the skies!

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Date: 8/6/2023 8:30:00 PM
Valsa, this is astoundingly beautiful!! I love it, it is a masterpiece of exquisite joy! Faved :) <3
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Date: 3/31/2022 8:07:00 AM
Congrats once again on your winning work. Way to go. I really like the first line in the fourth stanza. Sara
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Date: 3/20/2022 11:11:00 AM
Revisiting to congratulate. Brilliant and lovely! BW ~ Mala
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Date: 3/18/2022 11:59:00 PM
Yes Valsa, Heaven has flung all its treasures down, and there you are ...congrats
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Date: 3/18/2022 10:13:00 PM
Beautiful writing on spring. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/18/2022 9:12:00 PM
Brilliant as ever I must say, and a deserving win, congrats dear friend
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Date: 3/18/2022 6:15:00 PM
Congratulations dear friend. This lovely gem makes my day more lovely. Imagery that soothes!
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Date: 3/2/2022 8:12:00 PM
Lovely beyond description, your poem is so joyful! Tonight I have two of your poems added to my FAVs! <3
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Date: 3/2/2022 8:40:00 PM
So glad you saw it ! If this is added to your FAV... I feel more than honored ! Thank you so much, dear friend, BJ ! Blessings and warm Regards !
Date: 3/2/2022 6:37:00 PM
Valsa, This beautiful poem deserves a (FAV). I'm sorry you missed entering this poem as it would have won first place. Hugs ~ Debra
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Date: 2/25/2022 2:53:00 AM
I'm sitting here reading your lines and imagining the beauty of being right there!!
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Date: 2/24/2022 9:26:00 PM
gorgeous imagery, Valsa. Wow!!
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Date: 2/24/2022 6:01:00 AM
This is a poem within a poem "In the wind I hear the lilts of a forgotten melody From a woodland nearby, a lone bird sounds its parody It seems Heaven has flung all its treasures down And the Earth appears regally decked in floral crown" - so gorgeous!
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Date: 2/24/2022 3:06:00 AM
Aw I thoroughly enjoyed reading this write of yours Valsa, so lovely, so rich in imagery...such a beautiful day in Spring...A fav...Best wishes and hugs...~ Ani
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Date: 2/23/2022 10:24:00 PM
How delightful is your poem. Such great description which should be a great winner.
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Date: 2/23/2022 9:27:00 AM
delightfully descriptive with rich images. Feels like I am enjoying the lovely day with you. Love ~ Mala
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Date: 2/23/2022 9:22:00 AM
Richly descriptive! Good luck in the contest! Aloha!
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Date: 2/23/2022 6:41:00 AM
Valsa, a beautiful day in Springtime, as shown in your lyrical journey around the city. Thank you for sharing, wonderful analogies and the liveliness of the season are portrayed in these lovely verses. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. In my fave.
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Date: 2/23/2022 5:53:00 AM
Wonderful imagery and spring like buoyancy in delightful words. A FAVE for me. Much enjoyed your welcome to spring, Valsa.
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Date: 2/22/2022 6:41:00 PM
Oh wow, love this poetic journey through your 'Beautiful day in Spring' good luck in contest, Harry
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