A Beautiful Day

The beauty of the most beautiful will fade and wither and rot.
The sweet scent of floral gardens will turn sour and putrid with decay.
The flesh of the pure and innocent will be devoured by vile disgust and immoral disease.
The love of a tender heart will be greedily deceived by selfishness.
The soul once kind and free will be forever imprisoned with malice and shame.
The voice so rare will be quieted by scars of fear imbedded deep.
The hands that touched so softly will be the final feeling before the final breath.
The day he left will be the end of the most beautiful day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/28/2014 2:52:00 PM
awe, I love the day, he's left behind for you. Cheri, , CONGRATULATIONS, for making the top, hottest, and the best NEW poets list on the Poetry Soup. I'm happy for you. ~ LOVE ~ SKAT
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Cheri Burtovoy
Date: 2/2/2014 6:41:00 PM
Thank you so much :) It was a great honor to me, as always, to have my work appreciated. Thanks for stopping by to comment.
Date: 1/20/2014 11:44:00 AM
Are you trying to tell us that nothing good lasts forever? If so, you have elaborated well on the subject.
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Cheri Burtovoy
Date: 1/20/2014 10:58:00 PM
Thank you very much for the wonderful comment, it is one of the best feelings in the world when somebody "gets it"!! :)
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