Susan Mills Poet ABC

A Beautiful Couch

A beautiful couch, dusted entirely; five gentle hearts insist. Just kids, learning, moving, now 
overturning pillows-- quite riot, so teriffic--undaunting: Victory will expand young's zodiac.

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Gert W. Knop July 19, 2010 at 7:30 AM Very funny write, Susan, enjoyed reading it! And thank you for commenting "Future Dreams"! Have a great week!...Love, Gert

Vrushani Thaker July 18, 2010 at 10:49 AM This is fabulous!!!!!!!!!!!!! As usual this form is very difficult but you gave it a new concept to it!!!!!!!! well done!!!!!!!!!!! Vrushani!!!

Cesar Cantu July 17, 2010 at 12:16 AM I love poetry about the mundane, it turns our world into something transcendant and beautiful. Thanks a lot for sharing..ah, and for the comment.

Carolyn Devonshire July 16, 2010 at 1:15 PM Fun ABC poem, Susan. I'm trying to imagine all that's going on with this couch. LOL Love, Carolyn

James Fraser July 16, 2010 at 7:30 AM Busy couch taking plenty of life Susan, kool Acrostic >> James

Sara Kendrick July 16, 2010 at 7:17 AM I can see that couch...Those children having fun...Great write..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work those mosquitoes love to dine on me...Sara