Abdul Malik Mandani Poet Free verse

A Beacon of Hope

There is heavenly bliss in the sunrise
And magic in the picturesque sunset,
The grandmaster of spectacular shows
the sun is the giver and the taker of life,
The god of the ancient civilizations,
The sentinel of our time
The star of our world!


The Answer contest by SKAT A

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Andrea Dietrich August 19, 2015 at 9:00 PM I think you did a very good poem on the sun! Glad to see this one tonight. Abdul Malik Mandani August 20, 2015 at 11:05 AM Well, you are a beacon of hope!

Skat A August 17, 2015 at 11:19 PM Abdul. Congratulations, on what you thought the Answer should be in less than 8 lines.... Always ~SKAT

Eileen Manassian August 3, 2015 at 9:53 AM Lovely!!! Good luck in the contest. I love writing about the sun...and the moon. I loved every line of this piece...especially the part of the sun being the sentinel. Great work. Abdul Malik Mandani August 3, 2015 at 10:54 AM Thanks Eileen. Appreciate your comments.