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A Beach Day

The blue water licks the sandy shore washing away many footprints. the kids running down the beach make a splash moms are yelling-kids watch out... birds follow with delight. We are having so much fun, in the ocean water and sun. Look at little Tommy run, trying to shoot birds with his air gun. now time to go home say goodbye to the ocean.... sleep will come easy. Date Written 9/4/2020 Writing Challenge - Nature, Four in One - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France 3 Place Writing Challenge - Nature, Four in One - Contest Judged:9/20/2020 Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 9/29/2020 1:36:00 PM
Paula, congratulations on your win in my Nature Four in One Challenge with this wonderful write, a FAV for me _Constance
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/30/2020 9:02:00 AM
Thank You, for writing, your kind words and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have a win. I love the beach. It was a fun write. So glad you like this one. Enjoy your day.................
Date: 9/21/2020 3:22:00 PM
Dropping back to say many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/22/2020 9:50:00 AM
Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It was a fun write. It was an honor to have a win. Enjoy your week with hugs..............
Date: 9/21/2020 6:40:00 AM
- A wonderful day, Paula :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/21/2020 11:55:00 AM
Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have a win. Have a great week with hugs..........
Date: 9/6/2020 7:06:00 AM
I could feel the peace and contentment of your write...
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/6/2020 8:10:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like it. Oh! yes, the peace the beach and water bring. Enjoy your day............
Date: 9/6/2020 1:48:00 AM
I am hungry for these kinds of scenes; I am wishing for these days again.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/6/2020 8:08:00 AM
Thanks for your note. I really miss the beach. Glad you like this one. Enjoy your day............
Date: 9/4/2020 1:01:00 PM
No better day is spent than at the beach Paula, where memories are made. Tom
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/4/2020 1:14:00 PM
Thanks for writing. Glad you like this. You are 100% right, the beach is the best. Have a wonderful day.................
Date: 9/4/2020 10:46:00 AM
what fun imagery Paula, we live quite close to a lovely sandy beach:-) hugs jan xx
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/4/2020 11:05:00 AM
Thanks for writing. Glad you like this one. I can hear your beach/water calling. Need a roommate ?????? I am just kidding. I do love the beach and water. Have a wonderful day with a hug.................