Paula Goldsmith Poet Free verse

A Beach Day

The blue water licks the sandy shore  
washing away many footprints.

the kids running down the beach make a splash    
moms are yelling-kids watch out...   
birds follow with delight.

We are having so much fun,                                                                        
in the ocean water and sun.                                                                           Look at little Tommy run,    
trying to shoot birds with his air gun.

now time to go home                                                                               
say goodbye to the ocean....                                                                  
sleep will come easy.
                                                         

Date Written  9/4/2020        
Writing Challenge - Nature, Four in One - Poetry Contest                             Sponsored by: Constance La France 

3 Place    Writing Challenge - Nature, Four in One -                             
 Contest Judged:9/20/2020 Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Constance La France September 29, 2020 at 1:36 PM Paula, congratulations on your win in my Nature Four in One Challenge with this wonderful write, a FAV for me _Constance Paula Goldsmith September 30, 2020 at 9:02 AM Thank You, for writing, your kind words and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have a win. I love the beach. It was a fun write. So glad you like this one. Enjoy your day.................

Jan Allison September 21, 2020 at 3:22 PM Dropping back to say many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Paula Goldsmith September 22, 2020 at 9:50 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It was a fun write. It was an honor to have a win. Enjoy your week with hugs..............

Anne-Lise Andresen September 21, 2020 at 6:40 AM - A wonderful day, Paula :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Paula Goldsmith September 21, 2020 at 11:55 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have a win. Have a great week with hugs..........

Arturo Michael September 6, 2020 at 7:06 AM I could feel the peace and contentment of your write... Paula Goldsmith September 6, 2020 at 8:10 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like it. Oh! yes, the peace the beach and water bring. Enjoy your day............

Caren Krutsinger September 6, 2020 at 1:48 AM I am hungry for these kinds of scenes; I am wishing for these days again. Paula Goldsmith September 6, 2020 at 8:08 AM Thanks for your note. I really miss the beach. Glad you like this one. Enjoy your day............

Tom Cunningham September 4, 2020 at 1:01 PM No better day is spent than at the beach Paula, where memories are made. Tom Paula Goldsmith September 4, 2020 at 1:14 PM Thanks for writing. Glad you like this. You are 100% right, the beach is the best. Have a wonderful day.................

Jan Allison September 4, 2020 at 10:46 AM what fun imagery Paula, we live quite close to a lovely sandy beach:-) hugs jan xx Paula Goldsmith September 4, 2020 at 11:05 AM Thanks for writing. Glad you like this one. I can hear your beach/water calling. Need a roommate ?????? I am just kidding. I do love the beach and water. Have a wonderful day with a hug.................