Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Limerick

A Bawdy Limerick

My love gun loaded with hugs and kisses
when I pull trigger, there won’t be misses
there is no need to hide
there is no use to stride
I got you in front of my gun’s hisses.

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June 18, 2014
Form: Limerick (10-10-6-6-10)
Fourth Place win

** Based on Love’s Labour’s Lost of Shakespeare

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Sally Stevens August 12, 2014 at 10:04 AM LOL - I'm glad bawdy postings are allowed.

Arlene Smith July 9, 2014 at 8:59 PM lol! congrats on a great win, Dr. Mehta.. hugs.. Arlene

Poet Destroyer A July 8, 2014 at 11:43 PM Dr Ram, Congratulations, on your awesome win. Always~ Linda

S.Jagathsimhan Nair July 8, 2014 at 4:29 AM Mild dose of humor..., congrats, Dr.Ram

Andrea Dietrich July 7, 2014 at 4:06 PM congrats on your win, Dr. Ram!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 7, 2014 at 6:46 AM Great limerick Dr Ram ! Worthy great win,, big congrats!

Jan Allison July 6, 2014 at 4:53 PM Dropping back with my congratulations. Hugs jan xx

Paul Callus July 6, 2014 at 4:31 PM Even in a bawdy limerick you don't let down your guard completely! but the humour is there! Congrats on your win. // paul

Richard Ferry June 20, 2014 at 10:56 AM Clever! Good luck

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 19, 2014 at 6:07 AM sweetness along lines in the gun.. :D

Anne-Lise Andresen June 19, 2014 at 4:03 AM - This I liked very much, Dr. Ram. - Good luck in the contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison June 19, 2014 at 12:16 AM Very clever Limerick Dr Mehta. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan xx