A Basement Leak

An unusual smell in the air
Bright stains on the wall
Colour of the carpet
Dull, dull, dull darkness
Except for some dry areas
Further from the wall is
     untouched by water

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 11/1/2023 1:15:00 PM
Great ADC poem. Luv,Pangie
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/12/2023 10:50:00 AM
Hello Panagikota, thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs. Darlene/
Date: 2/15/2018 11:59:00 AM
Hello Darlene, Good write, hope the basement works go well.:)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/15/2018 12:04:00 PM
Hello Tahira, All the stuff that got damaged is all gone. The house is not near water either. So odd. have a nice day my friend.
Date: 2/15/2018 10:19:00 AM
Short but it conveys a feeling Are you aware that your profile picture is sideways? I'm sure it will not be too difficult to flip it around I had someone tell me that one of my poems, the dinosaur one,  He read it to his kid and he was giggling made my day more than any comment ever did, that's what I was going for. See yah
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/15/2018 12:09:00 PM
Yes i am aware that my profile picture is sideways.It won't go straight up, I have tried many times and it still goes sideways.I am so glad to hear that your dinosaur poem made a child laugh. That makes my day as well. See yah!
Date: 2/15/2018 12:45:00 AM
I can't tell you how often this is a fear for me. Old house, lots of basement leak issues. Good poem, bad situation. Thanks for sharing it with us!
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Date: 2/14/2018 8:16:00 PM
Hi Darlene, I've never experienced this but you write good ABC poem on the this type of situation. Happy Valentine's Day my friend. PS, thanks for visiting me today:-) Alexis
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/15/2018 12:23:00 PM
Hello Alexis,thank you for the comment. It is horrible to experience and I hope you never do.Have a happy Valentine's Day to you. my friend. Your welcome my friend. Have a nice day.
Date: 2/14/2018 1:33:00 PM
Not a good thing to look forward to repairing for sure. I hope you have someone who knows what to do.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/14/2018 7:02:00 PM
Hello Alfred, furniture down in the basement had to be thrown out. The carpet as well. Now the basement needs work. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 2/14/2018 10:15:00 AM
Homeless Miss The Most. I never have been a perfect host, Yet still do like homeless the most; Second Helpings Program existed; To participate more have enlisted. Food is available for all of them, Even if it has been a her or him; From local stores is contributed, And by our church is distributed. In church song had been humming, Those in need up we were summing, And no matter how many or why, We know God will always help us try.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/14/2018 12:51:00 PM
Hello James, homeless people have a hard life.Good to know that food is there for them. Yes God will always help you try. have a nice day my friend.
Date: 2/14/2018 8:34:00 AM
UGG, I have had this experience more than once! I Hope it all turns out well for you xxoo
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/14/2018 12:54:00 PM
Hello Mike,everything that was in the basement is gone,because of water damage. Yes things are working out thank you. Have a nice day my friend. xxx-ooo
Date: 2/14/2018 2:17:00 AM
- A terrible experience, I hope it will be ok Darlene - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/14/2018 7:16:00 AM
Hello Sunshine Smile, old carpet had to come out,as well old furniture had to be thrown out. Now new floor is needed. Big mess. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 2/13/2018 10:49:00 PM
Everyone's worse nightmare Darlene, it causes such destruction and you never know where to begin. I've had a couple over the years. Regards Tom
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/14/2018 7:19:00 AM
Hello Tom, I had one in my house in Wiarton,living there with my husband. now passed away. Big mess. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 2/13/2018 5:41:00 PM
Cute description of the joys of a householder. Fun poem.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/14/2018 7:28:00 AM
Hello Sunlite Wanter oh,yes joy. Joy of frustration of the big clean up. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 2/13/2018 5:32:00 PM
'G'et a plumber in! 'H'e'll fix it if he can. 'I'n case he doesn't, hope you can swim! J'ust joking, I am. 'K'indered a thought. 'L'et's continue this ABC. 'M'ake it a conversation. 'N'ow, do you agree, a collaboration.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/14/2018 7:32:00 AM
Hello Mick,continue this ABC by adding another verse? Okay let's make it conversation that is alright with me. I do not know how to do know how to do a collaboration. Sow me how to do it. Thank you. have a nice day my friend.
Date: 2/13/2018 5:21:00 PM
Oh no, I hope you can sort it out.. Have a nice day Darlene..
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/14/2018 7:41:00 AM
Hello Silent One,all the carpet had to come out in the basement.Then the furniture had to thrown out. New floor going in. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 2/13/2018 4:51:00 PM
Light, Sweet very descriptive thanks for sharing your creativity. James :)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/14/2018 7:42:00 AM
Hello James, this did happen. A big mess. So i wrote about it. have a nice day my friend.
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