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A Banished Breath

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The toxic air begins to plow A banished breath below his brow, A contorted face the last thing we see Ignorance thrust by just one knee; My brother’s pain lies on the ground There’s no escape for he is bound, The hatred falls from above his head Silent screams of the tears he shed; Asphyxiation by the light of day The vultures circle for their prey, A perfect view before the kill Now condemned against his will; The riots roar for in his name Innocence lost, who’s to blame, We all stand tall upon his death Heaven finds a banished breath. ...In Memory of George Floyd... ...My deepest condolences to the Floyd Family... May.29.2020 A World Without You Sponsored by: JCB Burl Placed 3'rd...Thank You

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Jenna Logan

Date: 6/28/2020 10:46:00 AM

I found the title of this poem as I skimmed your list of poems and my attention was in your grasp. Your rhyming message is one everyone should admire. I certainly do.

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/7/2020 8:51:00 AM

This is good representation...a truly poetic write...Like this...

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/6/2020 10:17:00 AM

I think this is one of the nicest, most thoughtful, endearing poems I have ever read, and to the family of an innocent man whose death was uncalled for, may the people responsible for his death be answerabe. Hugs and blessings Wingster. Jennster

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/3/2020 5:29:00 PM

This poignant tribute is outstanding WW! I could feel the empathy in your honest lines. I hope his family sees this. I am Faving it! Police brutality needs to cease. Serve and protect has become a joke. Bravo! Blessings xxoo

John Hamilton

Date: 6/3/2020 10:42:00 AM

It is a disgusting reality, but their actions are a reflection of the ruler of this world. Thanks for the write WW, a nice win is icing on the cake!

Charles Messina

Date: 6/2/2020 4:44:00 AM

Awesome tribute, Wingster. All 4 of these bastids and the ones who gave them their badges should be held accountable.What the world needs now...is a few more million of you running around. Love & hope my friend. Bravo! Charlie

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/1/2020 3:49:00 PM

Back to congratulate you on your win for a heartfelt write Wingster :)

Jc Hawkens

Date: 5/31/2020 5:46:00 PM

Wonderful dedication, and beautiful tribute. Congratulations on your win

Silent One

Date: 5/31/2020 3:09:00 PM

Brilliant dedication to a big injustice...Sad how some behave in this world.

Eve Roper

Date: 5/31/2020 12:26:00 PM

Great tribute, ^WW^.Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Michael Tor

Date: 5/31/2020 10:39:00 AM

Bravo my dear!! This is another great poem penned by the talented writers such as yourself and Demetrios that have done a great public message. Everyone should read, and share. The tragedy that took place is reflected by the outrage that is taking place. This act of evil, will transgress into more violence, death, and division among ourselves than anything. Check out richiefromboston on youtube and learn the secrecy why this was done. It's explained in his video. It is unbelievable. I will fav.

Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/30/2020 1:17:00 PM

Roaring riots, circling vultures...a brilliant representation of the death dear Wingster. Best wishes for the contest with your words :)

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 5/30/2020 8:53:00 AM

You captured the pain and suffering of one man and the horror. I would like to add my condolences. Thank you for this write WW.