A Baby with its Mother

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March- 25- 2025
Light Hearted about Kids Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Miranda Hawley

 

The baby sat joyfully on her lap The mother on his tender thighs did tap It tickled the boy to laugh and laugh He was just one and a half Both invariably enjoyed that sport No one came in between their fun to abort The baby had such fairy grace Kiss after kiss she planted on his face The blissful pair looked ever so cute Who on earth can their oneness thwart?

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Date: 3/27/2025 6:09:00 AM
So adorable! If the poem had a cheek, I'd pinch it! CayCay
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Date: 3/26/2025 6:35:00 PM
delicious and ravishing homage to mothers and so cute babies, the photo is a wonder, enjoyed reading you, take care
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Date: 3/26/2025 10:31:00 AM
Sweet poem, dear. Go back and see her rules. She wants ten lines or less. I had to redo my poem because I did not notice that at first!
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Date: 3/26/2025 6:38:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Andrea for the correction. I shall just take ten lines and delete the rest.
Date: 3/26/2025 3:14:00 AM
This is a beautiful tribute to all Mums and babies. Your poem is a gem and couldn't have been expressed it any better and and with such feeling. All the best in the contest. Hugs Maria
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Date: 3/25/2025 11:49:00 PM
Delightful poem and photo!
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Date: 3/25/2025 2:48:00 PM
Ahhh!! Such a nice tribute to this mother and child in particular and also to most mothers and their child/children. Sara K
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Date: 3/25/2025 6:06:00 AM
What is more precious than the bond between mother and baby? You highlighted it well Valsa. Pity the poor little ones being raised by drug addled, abusive or neglectful parents, an increasing scourge upon mankind
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