A Baby Is a Bundle

A baby is a bundle of jangling receptors
    a limb-wiggling curiosity machine
  Equipped to record and retain every sensation
    with nodes and neurons labyrinthine

  We watch her nap and feed
    pray she gets the sleep she needs
  While deep inside her, a learning explosion
    moves mighty mountains, fills vast oceans
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kingston Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 7:50 PM
As a mother of three, I find this beautiful. Your line,"pray she gets the sleep she needs" could come before, pray mommy does too. "a learning explosion" what a great way to describe what goes on over and over in a young brain and hopefully as that brain ages too. One can always have small explosions. What a nice poem Gershon.
Wolf Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 9:27 PM
Thank you, Marikate. I truly am fascinated by babies. Too bad I only had four of my own. (Wanted 10; oh, well).
Rodrigues Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 7:27 PM
All the potential inside that little bundle!
Romios Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 10:47 AM
How true this is, GW… Last line is my Fav. Pangie
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 10:42 AM
Hello Gershon, a baby is a bundle of joy. The baby will have a lot to learn. Enjoy your day my friend.
Turner Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 8:05 AM
Well written you son of a sage:) They gobble up information quicker than a frog eats a fly. have a great day, GW.
Rolland Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 1:48 AM
wonderful penning, i adore the thoughful conclusion, so enjoyable, thanks yann
Hawkins Avatar
March 12, 2023 at 9:03 PM
A beautiful innocent bundle of joy. A miracle of birth. what could be awesome than that. Thank you, Gershon. Your poem brought another smile to my face.
Wolf Avatar
March 12, 2023 at 9:12 PM
Endless fascination, babies are (at least to me)... Glad to hear about that smile, Belle. Keep smiling now, Gershon
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