A Ambiguous Music of Love

Still  could feel the saccharine notes
played on the alluring eyes where I lost myself
for a while.
It flattered  the  vanity of the  mysterious silence 
I wished to last long !

The innocence psyche of a stranger
enthralled the shadow of a crimson light ,
shinning towards a unknown desire.


But time flies...
before could open the door of a  shadowy charisma,
a ray of canon coalesced into a flash called alter ego.

Everything redesigned here after 
and a new hail embellished a new sky.
The essence of the rain drops 
introduced with the new river passed nearby.

I became totally bewildered
may be  was missing the passionate silence,
that was whispering a lot without making any noise.

A ambiguous music of love 
was drifting on the ocean of my heart.
And finally the fragrance of moderated emotion
propelled me to sink into the depth of the river.

Still the river is flowing 
and am too with all its up and downs.
I don't know about those eyes;
either closed or hold the story still alive !

Wish them a happy journey with new sight
to greet the soul and heart without any finest sacrifice.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Trifiatis Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 7:16 AM
A very well written poem my new friend, Nilina. Certainly your presence will soon be felt!
Deb Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 3:28 PM
thank you very much for your visit dear poet.It would be my pleasure .
Andresen Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 2:47 PM
- A great poem, Nilima - Very well written - hugs // Sun :)
Deb Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 10:41 PM
thank you dear poetess !love
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