A History of One Day

A HISTORY OF ONE DAY

Seven and the hated buzz assaults my ears, 
And in a half-hour I am in metro-hell  crowded.
In a glass box, with a thousand pole-hangers loaded,
Each pretending not to see the others.

Then out up the steps of Mauthausen  and push
Into an open freezer  of  darkness  and  murk,
Dodging ice-patches where treachery might lurk,
Over the bridge cowering from traffic’s rush.

Expending energy all day in voice and limb,
The school is warm and noisy with youth lively
Eroding my scant patience until five,  when I tidy
Up their mess gratefully. I’ve had it to the brim.

Someone else, anyone else, sends them to doting parents 
To be recharged and re-armed for tomorrow’s erosive assault on me.
Change clothes, cigarette and a small coffee,
Then zombie-like I fall into the crowd across the bridge, spent. 

Looking sideways at the ducks in the dark river - bliss! -
Two or three eiders  and a mallard, playing carefree,
Scuttling freely about after crumbs under a fallen tree. 
The ducks are past now, and we plunge into the abyss  -

Down, down, as the chambers of Auschwitz, leading nowhere
With the unseeing pole-thousand in our glass box like rats, 
And roar our weary way west to the suburban flats
And flop into an armchair to watch the tv news  there

About nothing happening to no one in particular, this day  - again.

. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 

Entered   in   FRANK  H.’s   Contest   “A History Of One Day”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 12/12/2011 9:51:00 PM
ok, it just dawned on me. Do you mean being on the subway? Now it makes sense!!
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Date: 12/12/2011 9:50:00 PM
I'm sorry, but can you explain pole hangers to me. I think everyone knows what it is except me!! Excellent writing as always, Sydney!! Congrats on your great win.
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Date: 12/12/2011 10:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Frank's "A History Of One Day" contest . Love, CarolSidney
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Date: 12/10/2011 10:41:00 AM
AGAIN SIDNEY,, congratulations in ANOTHER contest, have a wonderful day,..p.s.
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Date: 12/10/2011 8:57:00 AM
This was brilliant, Sidney.....you said what is true for so many, day in and day out. Congrats on a fine win!!
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Date: 12/10/2011 8:46:00 AM
An amazing write.Congrats on your win Sydney.
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Date: 12/10/2011 7:13:00 AM
Never heard of an Eider til this poem. My hubby and I looked it up and found out how gorgeous there are!
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Date: 12/10/2011 7:09:00 AM
That first stanza is stupendous, Syd. I love the expressions of pole hangers and not a one noticing the others! Congrats to you! Gwendolen
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Date: 12/10/2011 6:23:00 AM
what terrors time can bring large and small, how skillfully you bring us along with you, I can almost hear your labored breathing from the damn cigarettes! Wonderful write [I assume you speak of subways? trains..we would say strap-hangers..though many do grab the seats poled uprights] I t reminded me of the trains in London. In the US folks are a wee bit more friendly on public transport. CONGRAD's light & Love
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Date: 12/10/2011 5:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a day x
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Date: 11/20/2011 3:20:00 PM
I always enjoy your work Sidney. Good Luck in the contest. Tony
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