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Dietrich Avatar
December 25, 2011 at 9:40 AM
THis is very good writing, Clay. I really enjoyed the way you had the birds describing this place and how happy they are at the end of it to see the tourists leave. Sweet!!
Robbins Avatar
December 25, 2011 at 1:28 PM
I sincerely appreciate your comment and those that preceeded yours, Andrea I am a novice poet, unschooled in the craft but I am on occasion inspired. I'm glad to share, actually at times over zealous in my effort with strangers I meet in my business as a tour professional or even the blind-sided wo'man on the street, in line at Starbucks, such a nutty guy am I...
Haick Avatar
December 10, 2011 at 9:32 PM
No wonder the tourists can't get enough...just the Redwood grow is spatacular enough! Enjoyed this also, Clay. Keep sharing your poems....a delight to read...like a peaceful retreat. : ) Annalise
Wesley Avatar
December 5, 2011 at 4:53 PM
At first I thought it the prison island but your explanation clarified. Sounds like a great place to visit. Nicely penned.
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