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'a-Sigh'

Parched death when quenches its thirst from stream of life, it dries up with a...SIGH... Date : 10/13/2016 Note : For the contest (Life or Death one liner) by Silent One. *Placed Second*

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Anna-Marie Docherty
Date: 10/18/2016 8:27:00 AM
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Indeed I believe you could be right - I can imagine nature's sigh of regret amongst those who love nature; if a stream - water without which life would be nulled were to dry out... Such sad thoughts left when you consider what would be left of what was once there. Provokes a lot of thought there...
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 12/17/2016 12:19:00 AM
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I like your thoughts on my scribble. I agree with you totally.
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John Lawless
Date: 10/16/2016 9:16:00 PM
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This is a very interesting take on the theme Afzal. A subtle thought provoker.
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 10/16/2016 10:58:00 PM
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Thank you, John.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/16/2016 7:51:00 PM
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sure do love the idea of death drying up!! Congrats on your win.
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 10/16/2016 11:00:00 PM
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Thank you very much, Andrea.
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/16/2016 1:26:00 PM
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So creative poem , Afzal, congratulations on your win!
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 10/16/2016 10:58:00 PM
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Thank you very much, Eve.
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 10/15/2016 2:39:00 AM
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a wonderful win, afzal.. congrats and huggs
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 10/15/2016 4:30:00 AM
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Thank you, Nette.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/14/2016 11:05:00 PM
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Good use of personification--Congrats on your win! Janice
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 10/15/2016 2:28:00 AM
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Thank you, Janice.
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Alexis Y.
Date: 10/14/2016 10:32:00 PM
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Hi Afzal, This is so sad. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 10/14/2016 10:49:00 PM
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Thank you, Alexis.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 10/14/2016 8:37:00 PM
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Sadly stated, congratulations Afzal...
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 10/14/2016 10:57:00 PM
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Thank you, Charlie.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/14/2016 8:54:00 AM
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Sighing with you...
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 10/14/2016 9:15:00 AM
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You made me smile with your comment.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/14/2016 5:37:00 AM
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Very deep ... GL ...
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 10/14/2016 5:48:00 AM
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Thank you, Probir.

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