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YOU CAN TITLE THIS Vision blurred Couldn't see clearly Everything was like The electrons on a black and white TV screen Clarity I needed Fast forward Life in 3D Television Elevated I was Looking at life from another dimension I realized damage had been caused Exposed to the cold world I was Yes hoping to put Life on HOLD Scared of OLD age I was searching for a pause button And try’na rewind it to The black and white time When telly wasn’t clear When vision was blurred The Truth was there In black and white Staring at it I was never searching for a pause button Then Someone one else was Cruzing, I had no need to switch lanes I was at the pace of a black and white telly Knob I was looking forward and I had HOPE I would day dream and visualise to the Fast forward Life In my hands I hold the Baton The race was on On my own I, would try to out run my own shadow Someone told me not to stand idle, light a candle Too young to understand When the sun went down That is when my fun Began And I would run again That became the name of the game Fast Forward life in 3D Television I am again reminded about a beautiful anecdote to my ear A proverb to my heart Not to stand Idle For me to out run my own shadow I need to light a candle And not to put life on hold All I had to do Was to switch lanes, While slowing down like a black and white TV turning knob Because I now hold the Baton Like the buttons in a present 3D Television remote. At the push of a button I am Enlighten At the Push of a button I am Brain washed At the Twist of a knob I am Enlighten At the twist of a knob I found ENLIGHTENMENT

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Date: 8/13/2016 11:57:00 PM
Very nice, E.... Skat
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Date: 8/11/2016 9:29:00 PM
I am going to have to say that I think the poem’s theme is not a problem with the world for eternity the next few ideas for the future and I have been given the chance to see if you are looking for a great title of the most part. over exposure, but I do also need to be a find of my work and the other hand is the best of my work is done by a friend who is affected by the marriage license to be the start of the end of my life. it is fine with me if your interested in the mood of the title or not.
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Date: 8/11/2016 8:38:00 PM
Funny, title... emmanuel...Linda
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