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~ Venus and Mars ~

As the stars cross this brumous night ~ Standing here with these white washing tides Carrying away the sands beneath my feet Glancing beyond the repetitious of this champagne sea Swells amid the rifts now rising.... Before my thoughts and inside of my heart Communing with a chromatic collage of endless faces ~ This colloquy within my own souls revelations As the mist before my eyes begins to clear And the lighthouse of truth, as truth is, begins to appear Castaway phantoms walking upon the waters Beckoning unto me all of their beauties ~ Their irreplaceable hopes and dreams.... Transcending the tangibles, amid an unproportional world The relevancies of every life, speaking unto me As a warm tear rolls down my face While Jupiter explodes, before my eyes ~ Impaling my spirit with these impeccable purities.... Sublime; as I walk further into the swishing swirling currents Toward the fathoms of acceptances understandings Taking their precious hands, as the moon smiles upon their, glow ~ Born anew, within this panoramic and palindrome view.... Embracing their beating breathing hearts~These creations! Turning back the tides of time; castaways no more For it is all of life that I see now, deep inside the splendor The wonders of whom they are, each, as a precious jewel ~ Awakened, amid these implosive clarities.... As the stars cross the fading brumous night Standing here with the white washing tides Carrying away the sands beneath my feet, forevermore ~ Glancing beyond the repetitions of this champagne sea Phantasms of once thought lore, smiling as they come alive Lessons learned, and shifting dunes, of truths unfold.... While these rubies as tears, fall, from the corners of my sight Marking my cheeks, unto their graves of what used to be Slightly quivering lips; as these endless wells of emotion, arise inside Realizing, how much I truly care, for each and every one, of their lives ~ Mars, now embracing Venus with, an everlasting kiss.... ~ Of ~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~ Unconditional Love! ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/13/2010 12:04:00 AM
Wow...this is really, really great...written with so much passion...Venus and Mars...These lines really moved me :"As a warm tear rolls down my face While Jupiter explodes, before my eyes".This poem is superb!I'm putting it on my fav's! I'm so impressed...the use of imagery here is wonderful. It's a beautiful feeling to be so touched by your poem...Big hugs and kisses for you, Emily
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Date: 6/5/2010 10:16:00 AM
this is so sweet, and very special, a love only entwined within these beautiful stars. you seem to have a very profound soul yourself. and also, an encouraging friend. i just love your long & deep writes. i will have to read this one again John, until next time. take care(: -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 6/5/2010 7:07:00 AM
This reminds me of feelings when hearing a great piece of music, seeing marvelous scenery, or reading an inspired passage from a great book. Everything comes together for a short space. Love, daver
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Date: 6/5/2010 6:17:00 AM
Only a true romantic could paint this amazing picture of Venus and Mars getting together, John. Please send the "white washing tides" to Florida's Gulf coast. the oil is making its way east through the Panhandle now. Beautiful poem, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/4/2010 11:13:00 PM
beautiful descriptions Loved that line about champagne sea! Your vocabulary is impressive. I think sometimes you are confusing me with audrey & Celeste in your comments to me. Audrey's name is a LOT like mine. haha! About my poem "power within" it was based on picture of a tiger swimming in water. It was for a contest of Raul's I think! That might help you to understand it. I was discussing the instincts of that wild animal even when submerged in water. have a good weekend, John. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/4/2010 6:44:00 PM
A deep sense of motions while my heart and mind collide with each other. Your pondering on the connection of two soulmates are the shining stars that rise when all love prevails. A strong presious jewel is the breath of any giving love to conquer any drifts the air and moon bring. Howdy John, Love the poem. Thanks for a delightful poem. Glad to hear that you will try to return to soup. Have yourself a wonderful Night,..Sidney LeeAnn
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Date: 6/4/2010 6:24:00 PM
Pure unadulterated love, so beautiful does bring one to tears..funny how the solution to all of man's problems is within his grasp yet, he can not see..he reaches instead for the useless, fleeting things...another great one from a great mind...Totally enjoyed this, John...Bless you and take care..Peace, love, Audrey Thanks for comments on mine!
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Date: 6/4/2010 7:17:00 AM
It is a delight to be reading your poetry once again John. Thank you for your kind comments. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/3/2010 3:39:00 PM
How many beautiful poems this evening,and this one no less,I remember this beauty,Very romantic,love is uncnditional,so true,One for my favorite poems and poet too,John! C elene.
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