Touching Better'

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So this is the mirror write to 'touching reality' I have altered the title to align it more fully.'

 

Summer or Winter

Kindness; costs negligible.'

Your rewarder never sleeps.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 1/28/2016 7:44:00 AM
Words so gracious. Beauty so outspoken and creativity so explicit. I love this. Thanks for the beyond 7 share.
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Date: 1/13/2016 5:50:00 AM
Yes well this is a much nicer read. You have managed a very nice mirror here, would you consider showing both pieces together?
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Scott Thirtyseven
Date: 1/14/2016 2:08:00 PM
Why not, people to string haiku all the time. Besides which, these two senyru have a direct link. Go for it. Add to their net brilliance.
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Joe Maverick
Date: 1/14/2016 10:26:00 AM
You mean like string senryu.?
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Joe Maverick
Date: 1/13/2016 11:32:00 AM
Thanks for the feedback Scott..'
Date: 11/15/2015 9:53:00 AM
Touching truth here, dear Joe. Love, daver
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Date: 11/14/2015 8:03:00 AM
Such a brilliant and inspiring senryu you've penned my dear friend, Joe. I'ts my pleasure and honor to read one of your precious gems tonight. Thank you so much for sharing! Thank you so much as well for sharing generously your precious time to read one of my poems. More power and blessings! Many hugs from me! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 11/13/2015 5:33:00 PM
Interesting, Joe ... Love this side of you. Sk
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Date: 11/13/2015 10:35:00 AM
read this one
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Date: 11/8/2015 10:40:00 AM
I really like this one, Joe!
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Date: 11/7/2015 12:53:00 PM
Ahh!! Great Senryu..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 11/6/2015 1:01:00 AM
Ah how lovely Joe... wonderful n so true!
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