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So this is the mirror write to 'touching reality' I have altered the title to align it more fully.'

Touching Better'

Summer or Winter

Kindness; costs negligible.'

Your rewarder never sleeps.

feelingsgrowthsenryu

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Funom Makama

January 28, 2016 at 7:44 AM

Words so gracious. Beauty so outspoken and creativity so explicit. I love this. Thanks for the beyond 7 share.

Scott Thirtyseven

January 13, 2016 at 5:50 AM

Yes well this is a much nicer read. You have managed a very nice mirror here, would you consider showing both pieces together?

Scott Thirtyseven

January 14, 2016 at 2:08 PM

Why not, people to string haiku all the time. Besides which, these two senyru have a direct link. Go for it. Add to their net brilliance.

Joe Maverick

January 14, 2016 at 10:26 AM

You mean like string senryu.?

Joe Maverick

January 13, 2016 at 11:32 AM

Thanks for the feedback Scott..'

Daver Austin

November 15, 2015 at 9:53 AM

Touching truth here, dear Joe. Love, daver

Len Gasun

November 14, 2015 at 8:03 AM

Such a brilliant and inspiring senryu you've penned my dear friend, Joe. I'ts my pleasure and honor to read one of your precious gems tonight. Thank you so much for sharing! Thank you so much as well for sharing generously your precious time to read one of my poems. More power and blessings! Many hugs from me! love lots, Leonora