To Julianne

A lot said of Almighty’s modeling
Just a few minutes to lunchtime ding
Persons like thee make any evidence of such perish 
You came out hot from a specific idea
From the horizon of my world
Your image burns like the Maghreb sun

As a mortal of black earth that was once green
I made special effort to collect my mouth after a grin 
Which you planted scientifically upon me through a glance
Oh my poor scotched heart how will it ever decode
The messages you send from your bosom?

Upon the part of my lips 
Your  sweet name leaps
Straight into niche of memory 
Gazetted for cauliflory
Creating a colony 
There with live pixels

May the heavens bless your viability!
Your flower to be sweet upon maturity
And your virtues be multiplied as your pollen 
My nose will never tire to drag in your perfume.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 8/18/2015 5:42:00 AM
Great one Jotham!! Impressive
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Date: 8/6/2015 5:26:00 PM
Full marks to a most beautiful and romantic poem, Kilalo. I am positively impressed! // paul
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Date: 7/7/2015 12:48:00 AM
Wow! Keep writing! This is great!
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Date: 6/17/2015 9:28:00 AM
Kilalo, welcome to Poetrysoup! this poem is impressive s your first offer.. :) lovely metaphors and really a good tribute. Keep on writing =).. ~olive eloisa..
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Date: 6/15/2015 5:35:00 AM
Hi Kilalo, i enjoyed this romantic write. Very beautiful. Welcome to soup!
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