~ the Meadow ~

The meadows clearing....

Surrounded by the forest, afore the mountains sculpted by time

Majestic splendors, rising, beneath the blueish skies

With cascading waters, of virgins white melting snow

Heavens unveilings, before all of our eyes

These gifts unto the living, and all of life ~

As a mother deer stands frozen, aside her infant buck

Stirrings within the backdrops, that only her senses can perceive

While I watch her intently, and she watches me

Smiling at this wonder, created from the dust

A vision envisioned....

Before there was breath, or even light to be seen

Unfathomed treasures, beyond the diamonds of sight

The quiet that engulfs, this reflective mind ~

Looking unto the firmaments; beyond

Which shall soon reveal her twinklings, among the galaxies from afar

Eyes within this moment, that stand in awe

Beholding these castles, whereof once I never could

See clearly these tidings, of paradisiacals endless days ~

Glancing back at this mother; this deer and infant buck

A heart that melts, often ~

When I hear her voice, softly speaking unto me....

Wrapping her arms about my waist, gently, as she slowly proceeds

Within these sparklings, of soulful dreams, whispering, into my ears again

As I feel her breath, warm, that enraptures me so 

While I take her hands, perfect, within my own

And together again, we are, as we become, one  ~

Speechless, upon these streets  made of gold...."Now, Beyond"

This canvas, and beyond this time

Unto the promises of tomorrows, forevermore....

Smiling as I turn, to kiss her sweet and fragrant lips

Knowing, that we shall always be like this ~

While the mother she then, blinks her innocent eyes

And her baby he leaps, with joy inside

As his father approaches, with his siblings in tow; reunited

These dawnings that awaken, as I draw her close

Breathing her beauties, and kissing her hair 

Amid this moment together, becoming as one....

Seeing yesterdays promises, now, beyond these hues ~

Winking as they smile, these Angels, always watching us all

While The Father He glistens, as we stand in awe

Before the forest, the mountains, and the water falls

Within the meadows of clearings; these visions

The jewels of eternals, "Everlasting Love" ~

As she embraces my heart, and I caress her brow

Approaching, again, to say hello unto us now

The Father of all creation, and the Son, of all light

Together as one, together, for all of "Time!"

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

~ The Meadow ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 9/23/2010 6:15:00 PM
So painfully beautiful, John Rhinem!!! And one day your beautiful vision will be reality! You will see with your own eyes, these wonders in the presence of Jesus Christ the Lord of our Triune God who lives forever!
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Date: 12/5/2008 3:43:00 PM
Timeless, beautiful and extremely heartfelt. The inspiration guides the reader's eye so seemlessly from one line to the next. Quite a lovely message conveyed. Peace always and have a Happy & Healthy Holiday season. John
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Date: 11/29/2008 3:54:00 PM
A lovely title for this piece, John. Rapt images that cause the words to flow...much like that 'waterfall'. 'Meadow's do feel like a spot where one might gather one's thoughts. The images here are sweet and subtle. They create a peaceful ambiance. I love how you've chosen the deer as characters..those beautiful and serene eyes...certainly soul seekers. I hope you're well and happy, John! Wishing you the best..God bless you and yours! Love to you..Mikki
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Date: 11/23/2008 11:21:00 PM
Now, this has made me speechless John! You never grow tired of amazing people with your heartfelt reflecting poetry:) This is another beautiful marvel from you. Every time I read it, it grew more beautiful. Mesmerizing overview. You hold love and God very close..and this is evident from your all writes and this makes them even more beautiful and precious each time:) Always, Chitra
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Date: 11/23/2008 8:10:00 PM
John I posted a comment but it didnt appear . This is wonderful. God bless you Michael Torres
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Date: 11/23/2008 8:09:00 PM
John this is absolutely beautiful. I had to take a deepbreath whatan imagination you have. What a wonderful loving story. John you need to write a christian book of poems everychurch in America would promote this Heavenly gift of words that take us to these special places in our hearts,I know always marvel at your work but I can't help it. You have such agreat gift like few on a cosistant basis one right after another. Find yourself a publishing house and share your wonder throughyour eyes and
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