Get Your Premium Membership

Santa Used An Emergency Parachute

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Eve Roper.


Twas the night before Christmas Dressed in my red Santa pajamas. Tap, Tap, Tap, and a whispered strain; Santa knocked at my windowpane. Dressed in a red velvet hat and suit, Lined in white fur, a black belt and boots. His hair, so white I had to stare; His breath puffing white in the chilly air. "Sorry, but you've no chimney, that's plain To see, and I know this is insane." "Rudolph, the Red-Nosed Reindeer Hollered as we hung in the air." "Santa, use your big magic charm bags To deliver the gifts with name tags." "It takes time to deliver gifts from dusk to dawn. I emerged in a parachute to land on the lawn." I said, "That's okay, Santa, I'm totally pleased I'll give you a squeeze, I'm not displeased." "I thought delivering you had different shifts, I was wondering how I'd get my gifts." 11/28/2022 The Night Before 3 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 12/24/2022 6:49:00 AM
Congrats on your win Eve, Wonderful write, Merry Christmas
Login to Reply
Date: 12/23/2022 7:55:00 PM
Exciting writing and a very beautiful Santa scene is created. Congratulations!
Login to Reply
Date: 12/2/2022 12:33:00 PM
Best wishes, Eve. This is one of your best, I am FAVING, delightful! Creative and a moving image! You go girl! Impeccable verses. Christmas hugs, Pangie
Login to Reply
Date: 11/30/2022 2:09:00 AM
Cute and fun:)
Login to Reply
Date: 11/29/2022 3:40:00 PM
this is adorable, Eve. This line right here was super cute with its internal rhyme: I'll give you a squeeze, I'm not displeased."
Login to Reply
Date: 11/29/2022 9:47:00 AM
Cute, Eve, and I love the video!
Login to Reply
Date: 11/29/2022 9:05:00 AM
Delightful! Santa finds a way...as does our loving God. Blessings my friend!
Login to Reply
Date: 11/29/2022 5:28:00 AM
Great fantasy. Loved it.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/29/2022 2:10:00 AM
This is so cute and highly imaginative ! The poem and the picture are equally beautiful. I wish you all the Best in the contest dear Eve !
Login to Reply
Date: 11/29/2022 12:18:00 AM
Any which way, he always delivers lol. Good luck in the contest Eve. Tom
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs