" Raul "

1 " Sad Reality " So " Compelling ; and Profound " ( Raul ) ( MIATIANNA ) 2 With my Heart Softened By eyes, see Pride in her eyes Princess of Haiti ( HG ) Dedicated to my " Senryu Sensei " Raul Moreno " Author's Note : The First two lines in the First Senryu are " Raul's" Words " { I added the first ( So ) } In a comment to my POEM " MIATIANNA " The Second Senryu is my Response

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Date: 2/10/2010 1:14:00 PM

Nice tribute to Raul! Interesting reflection. I have been reading some good End Line Word poems. You and Dane must be happy to have this form taking life. Hope to see it in The Soup's form list soon. Best wishes. Karen

John Freeman

Date: 1/31/2010 10:56:00 AM

An awesome dedication to an awesome poet.HG, Sincerely, Moses

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2010 5:22:00 PM

I like that title for Raul, Senryu Sensei!!

Raul Moreno

Date: 1/30/2010 3:38:00 PM

HG, it's a pleasure that you quote anything of mine, feel free my friend...Raul

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/30/2010 3:06:00 AM

Nice tribute to Raul.wherever i go,i shall always think Of Raul as a guy of few words,yet his words are wisdom,his friendship is true,a good listener,and a Haiku/Senryu Master, Raul could feel this sad reality in his comment,and your sensitive heart appreciated how he felt..bravo..Charma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/29/2010 10:01:00 PM

A great dedication to a fine poet! Love, Carolyn

Raul Moreno

Date: 1/29/2010 7:33:00 PM

Your creativity is ablaze, nice work HG as always...Raul