~ Poem the 1st Chap. Inspired Bye ~ Part #26

"True abhorrence and blind tendentiousness, devoid of conscience  strive only to nullify freedoms' humble cry-for-peace". Love, patient,  proven;- the memory of God's surrender, tested lay in question. Mercy receives no rejoinder for her desire, unholy banter, rules the day. Forgiveness, proper and forthright, in-your-hands-I-place-certain this hope. Help me ... lift me up ... secure me ...  They rip and tare, at the fabric of my being, breaking-into-the-cradle-of-my-beliefs, shouting, "where is Your master, He has left you,  why do you still hold on"? And I say to them,  "I believe-that-my-faith-and-I, walk-hand-in-hand-with Jesus, my deliverer. So therefore ... will-I-never-walk-alone". So show me beauty; true love beheld ...  butter cups thorny white milky baby, budding roses- playing beside dancing lilies caught up in their passions,  mid the prevalence ... of the new morning winds, undying  laughter ... unable to be kept, purely acquired sown of faith  through the fresh wounds; of our Lords treasured innocence. As so it is I feel ... the beauty, you will feel, and too will see,  what it means to be truly falling in love with God, furthermore,  as you embrace the chance again ... .To view, and live moreover  even greater as you look, openly upon these things,  coming to  know and accept the Joy that all God's creation ... already  knows, and holds up for you each day maturing and arriving,  in the welcome found adrift  and proving within the honest winds,  offered, to you through the love of our Lord  swirled up today here, and now, again just for you ... ~ Because I believe "Love  is hopeful- awaits patiently- openly believes,  because it knows  grace always provides,  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ the opportunity". ~~~~~~~~~~ Loud gunshots ring out hunters aim to bag their mark deer season again ... . Sensing  trouble near mother calls from  meadows edge protecting young  one ... . Spirit of the fawn hearing  mothers beckoning scurries  into woods ... . Answering timely love listens protects  itself beyond fears advance.

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Date: 8/21/2009 3:02:00 PM
Interesting. I like last two lines. Keep writing.Sara
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