*** On the Beach

Please don't tie me up in a relation, 
please don't ask me silly questions, 
please don't take away me freedom, 
please don't sweet talk, 
i know without you I'd have to walk.
Please don't buy me flowers, 
please don't light up like a tower, 
please don't make promises, 
please don't make my heart who misses, 
fake hugs and fake kisses, 
please get out of my life when it's all over, 
please don't look for me like a rover, 
please don't let me be your lover, 
please don't get emotional, 
i won't cry coz i am rational, 
please don't look like i betrayed you, 
who said i ever loved you? , 
please don't try to negotiate, 
please stop pretending and don't agitate, 
please don't take my heart away, 
please let the sand slip away, 
please don't behave like a leech, 
am only asking for *** on the beach.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 5/18/2011 2:31:00 AM
Anyone who has ever had a holiday romance will be able to relate to this! Kind of funny but sad at the same time. A good write.
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Date: 8/24/2010 11:09:00 PM
VERY funny, rinki, that last line. good grief. hahaha. Is your name a guys'? I was thinking it was a girl's name, but from this poem, I am guessing now that you are a guy? I liked this one! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/28/2010 9:06:00 PM
HI RINKI , A NICE RHYMING POEM ! Sweethrart of Poetry below has made 'Nandy' into 'Randy' ! BEST WISHES , - Raj
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Date: 7/9/2010 6:34:00 PM
Sounds good to me rinki randy... beach is a great place .. for anything.. enjoyed your very creative write.. with luv..
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