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Ode to the Watchers of the Soul

In the visage of gentle pallor, they sit enthroned, Guardians of depth, in blue-grey tones adorned. A tapestry of life, in twin orbs, is shown, Mirrors to the world, in curiosity born. Not just the hue, but the stories they hold, Of love's soft whisper, of sorrows untold. In silent vigil, they perceive the bold Tales of the heart, as life's drama unfolds. With every glance, a universe expands, Embracing loved ones with invisible hands. In their gaze, a tender vigilance stands, A testament to where true beauty lands. Yet, amidst this splendor, a shadow creeps, As sight falters and the dark spots leap. A grotesque dance, where light slowly seeps, But still, they watch, they guard, they keep. For even as the clarity may wane, The soul's windows endure, through the pain. In every look, love remains the same, Eyes that know, eyes that love, eyes that reign.
*I wrote this poem on April 14, 2024, as a poetry challenge. The prompt was “Write an ode to your favorite body part.”

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Date: 8/5/2024 8:41:00 AM
Hello Courtney, I have not visited you for awhile and thought I would stop by. You are one of the deep writers I like to read and this one is no exception. I like how you celebrate the eyes as windows to the soul, reflecting a lifetime of experiences, love, and resilience, even as you face the inevitable decline of sight. Now that I am older I notice my own sight is changing up over the past several years and could relate. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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