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When all the lines you crossed but didn't see Grow darker by the day upon your face Your rosy blush of youth has been erased And cheeks are drawn where dimples used to be Your train of thought fueled by a memory Runs tracks of time that don't lead anyplace The stops along the way will be retraced Then one day it will stop in front of me I'd like to think the pause will bring a smile Your heather colored eyes would brightly bloom Your heart would beat the rhythm of a rhyme You'd disembark and stay a little while And when you blink I'll be back in the moon The smile so warm it lasts until next time by Daniel Turner

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/18/2017 8:06:00 PM
I Loved the sonnet. Well done, as a poem should be. I find your poems inspiring. Blessings, Vivien (Scarlett)
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Date: 12/13/2016 3:15:00 AM
This is so lovely Daniel. It shows what a wonderfully kind spirit you have. Carole
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Date: 12/10/2016 5:00:00 AM
I absolutely love this sonnet..well done! I must try this Italian version as well...Super 7
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Daniel Turner
Date: 12/10/2016 7:06:00 PM
Thank you, James:) Have fun:):)
Date: 12/8/2016 2:03:00 PM
I love this poem it is well written.I got through with the poem I had trouble to write.I have a question. What is a character? I needed the word Mr and I put the period after the word Mr and my poem did not go through.I wrote it six times before I got it right. Why?
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Daniel Turner
Date: 12/10/2016 7:06:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene:)
Date: 12/4/2016 9:13:00 AM
Lovely sonnet Daniel, not familiar with the form, but I can see the difference in the rhyme, really well done!
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/5/2016 10:01:00 AM
Been sick for a while but getting my strength back, thanks for your concern.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 12/4/2016 6:32:00 PM
Thank you, John. Really nice to see you. Everything going OK?
Date: 12/1/2016 8:42:00 AM
I love this Daniel , it so sweet, so romantic, and so beautifully written the form of Italian Sonnet. Saving this one to my favorites.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 12/2/2016 12:57:00 PM
Thank you, Becca. I'm so glad you liked it:)
Date: 11/28/2016 4:40:00 AM
Oh Danny, that third stanza would make any woman melt! It is hard not to fave every poem of yours I read...I can't help but fave this one! It is divine! 7 ; )
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Daniel Turner
Date: 12/2/2016 12:55:00 PM
Thank you Mrs Connie. You're so kind:)
Date: 11/26/2016 1:53:00 PM
Another masterfully written piece my friend!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 12/2/2016 12:54:00 PM
Thank you, Mike:)
Date: 11/25/2016 3:26:00 PM
ohh, visually enticing as this piece reaches out through my screen , daniel... finer than fine.. huggs
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Daniel Turner
Date: 12/2/2016 12:53:00 PM
Thank you Nette:)
Date: 11/25/2016 2:40:00 PM
I hope she visits often. I like to see you smile...go Hogs
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Daniel Turner
Date: 12/2/2016 12:53:00 PM
Me too! Thanks Tim:) My hogs got slaughtered. Lol
Date: 11/25/2016 8:59:00 AM
This is beautiful Daniel :)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 12/2/2016 12:52:00 PM
Thank you Mrs Kay:)
Date: 11/25/2016 8:08:00 AM
Great sonnet...Very well written... I enjoyed it...
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Daniel Turner
Date: 11/25/2016 8:35:00 AM
Thank you Supraja. So glad you enjoyed it. Hoping you have a wonderful weekend:)
Date: 11/25/2016 7:10:00 AM
A sonnet with deep meaning, Daniel:) you're so good at them:)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 11/25/2016 8:34:00 AM
Thank you, Jo. I appreciate your kind comments and friendly visits:)
Date: 11/25/2016 6:15:00 AM
A lovely sonnet ... a joy to read ....
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Daniel Turner
Date: 11/25/2016 8:33:00 AM
Thank you Probir. I appreciate your support. Hoping you are well:)
Date: 11/25/2016 3:32:00 AM
- A wonderful sonnet, Daniel - Best wishes for a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 11/25/2016 8:30:00 AM
Thank you Anne Lise. I hope you have a lovely weekend also. I appreciate you stopping by to share a smile:)
Date: 11/25/2016 2:36:00 AM
I swear I flashed to Steve Nash of Crosby, Stills, Nash and sometimes Young. His piano with a collaberative CSN arrangement, ah - lovely. Are you swaying with me? A delightful find that I may finally fav. I'm not kidding about CSN - I really went there the first time and 2nd, but just this 3rd time, identified where I 'went.' Okay. Soo good ... CayCay
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Daniel Turner
Date: 11/25/2016 8:29:00 AM
"Sweeping cobwebs from the edges of my mind. Had to get away to see what we could find" "All on board the train" You mean like that? Thank you CayCay, such distinguished company:)
Date: 11/24/2016 9:16:00 PM
Magical and romantic notes, love - "Your heart would beat the rhythm of a rhyme".
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Daniel Turner
Date: 11/25/2016 8:18:00 AM
Thank you Paloma. Glad you liked it. Hope you had a wonderful Thanksgiving:)
Date: 11/24/2016 8:06:00 PM
Mysterious Daniel. Makes one think. Very nice.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 11/25/2016 8:17:00 AM
Thank you Heidi. It's always a pleasure when you visit:)
Date: 11/24/2016 8:04:00 PM
lovely poem, daniel! i'm crazy about the line beginning with "your heart..."
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Daniel Turner
Date: 11/25/2016 8:16:00 AM
Thank you Mrs Ilene. I appreciate your kind comments and support:)