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Love Sacrified

White
                                                 Lacey
                                     Curtain blows
                          Breath of life gone
                      Empty

                                                         faith
                                            Grows strong 
                                      In man’s heart
                             sacrifices
                             paid
                                     

  Written by Lori McClure
 for  Nette Onclaud  "TURN ON THE LATERNE"

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Stephan McBride Date: 10/9/2011 4:03:00 PM great write to show where the light source comes from that shall never go out Login to Reply

Tim B Date: 9/10/2011 10:13:00 AM Lori, this was written beautifully and in beautiful style. It captures something beautiful about the picture, I like the expression. Congrats on your win! Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 9/9/2011 10:23:00 AM congrats on your win also!! I love all these lanternes....I relly like the way you posted your flowing poem.....like the painting!! Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 9/8/2011 5:15:00 PM Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette,Lori Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 9/8/2011 4:11:00 PM Congrats Lori on your fantastic win with this awesome Lanterne poetry luv.. Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 9/8/2011 2:06:00 PM Excellent presentation here Lori!A great write.Congrats on your win!! Login to Reply

Bob Quigley Date: 9/8/2011 10:55:00 AM Congratulations on your win Lori Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 9/8/2011 8:50:00 AM great one, doris..congrats on your glowing win in my contest.. check the blog! …so proud of you..huggs! Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 9/8/2011 8:16:00 AM Congratulations on your placement in Nette's "Turn On The Lanterne" contest Lori. Love, Carol Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 9/8/2011 5:00:00 AM Lori congrats on your superb win..David Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/6/2011 10:57:00 PM VERY nice. I kind of saw that same idea when I saw the picture. Login to Reply