Lori Lucas Mcclure Poet Lanterne

Love Sacrified

White
                                                 Lacey
                                     Curtain blows
                          Breath of life gone
                      Empty

                                                         faith
                                            Grows strong 
                                      In man’s heart
                             sacrifices
                             paid
                                     

  Written by Lori McClure
 for  Nette Onclaud  "TURN ON THE LATERNE"

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Stephan McBride October 9, 2011 at 4:03 PM great write to show where the light source comes from that shall never go out

Tim B September 10, 2011 at 10:13 AM Lori, this was written beautifully and in beautiful style. It captures something beautiful about the picture, I like the expression. Congrats on your win!

Doris Culverhouse September 9, 2011 at 10:23 AM congrats on your win also!! I love all these lanternes....I relly like the way you posted your flowing poem.....like the painting!!

Dr.Ram Mehta September 8, 2011 at 5:15 PM Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette,Lori

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 8, 2011 at 4:11 PM Congrats Lori on your fantastic win with this awesome Lanterne poetry luv..

Kash Poet September 8, 2011 at 2:06 PM Excellent presentation here Lori!A great write.Congrats on your win!!

Bob Quigley September 8, 2011 at 10:55 AM Congratulations on your win Lori

Nette Onclaud September 8, 2011 at 8:50 AM great one, doris..congrats on your glowing win in my contest.. check the blog! …so proud of you..huggs!

Carol Sunshine Brown September 8, 2011 at 8:16 AM Congratulations on your placement in Nette's "Turn On The Lanterne" contest Lori. Love, Carol

David Williams September 8, 2011 at 5:00 AM Lori congrats on your superb win..David

Andrea Dietrich September 6, 2011 at 10:57 PM VERY nice. I kind of saw that same idea when I saw the picture.