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Hand in hand two sprites on a magic flight      
with wings of crystal glass and fairy light 
they flew, inside an abstract sky of white  
wing to wing, one was nimble one was bright 

Wearing  taffet gowns of silky swishes 
they were often flourishing their wishes 
blessing all with benign hugs and squishes 
tiny pixies, no bigger than mom's dishes 

They were sent to baby rooms and wee ones 
they shone like light from fifty golden suns 
but every now and then they goofed all thumbs 
and landed in a cabbage patch, oh crumbs !

they flew like Peter Pan and Tinker Bell  
with magic wands to cast a spell, pell-mell
they scurried this way that and then oh well  
they crazed it up and then they cast a spell.  

 
Feb 26, 2023 
Sponsor	Eve Roper
Contest Name	Nursery Rhyme

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 3/16/2023 10:29:00 AM
Such a fun poem! I can see a child's eyes growing wide with wonder as they read your words... So well done, Rose!
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Date: 3/12/2023 11:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A fun/magical~~write/picture. Have a blessed day/week...............
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Date: 3/6/2023 7:07:00 PM
Lovely, sparkly, glistening, pretty, funny, darling!!!! I'm so glad I found this one.
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Date: 3/4/2023 6:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Mystic Rose. Wonderful Nursery Rhyme. Eve
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Date: 3/5/2023 12:37:00 PM
Thank you for honoring my poem Eve, glad you enjoyed it xo
Date: 3/4/2023 1:49:00 PM
Congratulations on this winner in Eve's contest. Creative lines penned. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara
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Date: 3/5/2023 12:37:00 PM
Thank you dear Sara God bless
Date: 2/27/2023 5:31:00 AM
A magical, delightful poem, Vienna. Much enjoyed.
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Date: 2/27/2023 11:55:00 AM
Thank you for your kind visit Vijay, have a happy day :)
Date: 2/27/2023 3:32:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Vie:)
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Date: 2/27/2023 3:55:00 AM
Thank you dear Jo. May we always be like children in our hearts, and live the fantasy forever. Blessings :)
Date: 2/27/2023 2:21:00 AM
What a great nursery rhyme you wrote, Vie. Can't see but a winner. Hugs.
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Date: 2/27/2023 3:54:00 AM
Thank you dear Victor, I hope Eve likes it, take care, stay blessed in mind heart and soul :)
Date: 2/26/2023 11:18:00 PM
beautifully written, love dreaming with Peter Pan, your images are so cute, thanks yann
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Date: 2/27/2023 3:54:00 AM
Thank you dear Yann may you be blessed with days of inspiration :)

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