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Heart wrecker

A zapped mallet She wields in her feeble hands Every heart is nailed

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Date: 12/6/2024 8:18:00 PM
Cool verse!
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Kofi Amed
Date: 2/11/2025 1:21:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 7/5/2024 7:57:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Kofi Amed
Date: 2/11/2025 1:22:00 PM
Thank you and Amen :)
Date: 12/4/2023 1:53:00 PM
Great haiku with clever use of words..
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Kofi Amed
Date: 12/6/2023 5:04:00 AM
Thank you:)

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