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Drenched by the rain
                               Golden key fits perfectly in the door lock
                                       Home with lots of wet dog kisses











24.05.2013
A-L  Andresen :)                      
                                              * contest: Leonora 


(4th place in the contest)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 6/9/2013 9:21:00 PM
Good poem. I enjoyed reading it - PJ
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/9/2013 11:34:00 PM
- Thanks for your visit and your kind comments, P.J. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/30/2013 3:25:00 PM
lovely poem Anna I can picture it Linda
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Date: 5/30/2013 11:28:00 PM
- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Linda. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/30/2013 12:02:00 PM
Hi Anne Lise! Thanks for your visits and kind comments. I haven't been here lately but am glad I have the day off and the time to enjoy PS. Enjoyed your lovely Haiku! Have a good weekend, too. Love, Annalise
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Date: 5/30/2013 12:03:00 PM
- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Annalise. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/30/2013 9:35:00 AM
Dogs definitely can give you the warmest of welcomes... enjoyed this haiku of yours that made me smile. Thank you.
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Date: 5/30/2013 9:43:00 AM
- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you P.iNk. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/30/2013 6:26:00 AM
Nice one, Anne Lise, Congrats on your win!! Jag
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/30/2013 7:06:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting & congratulation - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/29/2013 5:35:00 PM
Very nicely done. Congrats on your win. AO
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Date: 5/30/2013 1:23:00 AM
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Date: 5/29/2013 5:16:00 PM
Nothing better than doggie kisses. My dog used to sit by the window and come wagging her tail when I came home from work. Always a happy greeting. Sure miss her. Nice haiku. love phyl
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Date: 5/30/2013 1:24:00 AM
- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Phyllis. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/29/2013 4:28:00 PM
Sounds perfect to me! I really like it...nice write. I hope you are doing well...xxoo Miss you! Holly Moore
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Date: 5/30/2013 1:24:00 AM
- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Holly. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/29/2013 11:38:00 AM
Ahhhh. With two dogs I get lots of these....congratulations.
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Date: 5/29/2013 11:51:00 AM
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Date: 5/29/2013 10:41:00 AM
hey nice one here loved reading this, probably all the more as i am awaiting to see the first shower of rain, after this sticky summer
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Date: 5/29/2013 11:52:00 AM
- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/29/2013 3:04:00 AM
Nicely written and congratulations on your win, Anne Lise. Thanks also. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 5/29/2013 3:05:00 AM
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Date: 5/28/2013 5:48:00 PM
Concise but so much feeling here. Congratulations on your big win and thank you also for your many kind messages. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/29/2013 12:34:00 AM
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Date: 5/28/2013 5:36:00 PM
I loved this when I first read it. Congratulations on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 5/29/2013 12:33:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting & congratulation - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/28/2013 3:22:00 PM
Congratulation on your win,a beautiful expressed poem.'God bless you. Hugs!Erich
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Date: 5/29/2013 12:33:00 AM
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Date: 5/28/2013 2:00:00 PM
congrats on a fine win Anne
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Date: 5/28/2013 2:25:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting & congratulation - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/28/2013 1:22:00 PM
Congrats on your win, This brought a smile to my face.
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Date: 5/28/2013 2:25:00 PM
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Date: 5/28/2013 1:00:00 PM
My big hearty congratulations my dearest friend , Anne Lise for your win and your very beautiful poem. I love it so much and I’ve extremely enjoyed. Thanks a lot for your full support! Love lots, Leonora
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Date: 5/28/2013 2:27:00 PM
- Thanks for that I was selected as one of the winners, Leonora. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/28/2013 11:29:00 AM
Well, enjoyed it. hope the key will unlock many padlocks to many heart kisses.
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Date: 5/28/2013 11:45:00 AM
- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Hem. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :
Date: 5/28/2013 6:05:00 AM
I like this one. Dog kisses are great. Thanks for reading and commenting on my work, Jancarl
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Date: 5/28/2013 9:04:00 AM
- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Jancarl. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :
Date: 5/28/2013 3:54:00 AM
It's is so good to come home to the things which bring joy! Lovely, Anne-Lise... David
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Date: 5/28/2013 9:03:00 AM
- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you David. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :
Date: 5/27/2013 11:30:00 PM
Excellent. Lovely picture of love. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 5/28/2013 1:53:00 AM
- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Ravi. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :
Date: 5/27/2013 8:26:00 PM
Love the haiku ;} xxxx
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Date: 5/28/2013 1:52:00 AM
- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Debbie. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :
Date: 5/27/2013 6:57:00 PM
A tasty little treat, thank you Anne Lise. I loved it. Douglas
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Date: 5/28/2013 1:52:00 AM
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Date: 5/27/2013 11:56:00 AM
lovely...
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Date: 5/27/2013 11:57:00 AM
- Thank you for visiting my home Vandana.- oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/27/2013 9:36:00 AM
Who could ask for a more loyal kiss? Lovely and true! Thank you A-L!
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Date: 5/27/2013 10:05:00 AM
- Thank you for visiting my home Demetrios.- oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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