Forever Calls Marriage of the Night

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unrhymed quatrains

The moon is a lonely man's chalice to drink from drunken paradise in such darkness we cling unto the light where warmth of a thousand candles flickers inside there it dances with the shadows of dreams Once upon a time crowned with the stars Aura perfectly falling like lightening you came in a heart burst flames one in a hundred miracles lovingly wrapped up within a gift gem pearl of the oceans wave turns around Caressed through a soul captured breath salted with the sweetest spice of the earth's crust cracked burning down the mountain trails held in a silent moment giving someone the power over us truth heaven is in your beam

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 6/10/2018 9:17:00 AM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!This is the most very beautiful romantic tender sweet n' captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful heartfelt romantic dreamy heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet! Just wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^