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~ For Her ... For Me ~

~ If were I to have my way ... the-welcome-of- those ten days, then I'd be sure, she would know. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ My love the fairest dream-of all-I-wanted-to share the-one- held-so-dear ... that I-couldn't let-go-of-for anyone, but her. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~ As-yes plain-rides-come-to-mind-jet setting buried love and ~ daily qualms-the-quiet-suicides was all that came of those days, and because-I-have-come-to-find-parachutes are an option only for those-that-are of the living, and not for-those-walking-alone ~~~~ within themselves already-reeling from their regrets. ~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~ Because I too exist-myself ... as I walk this valley, of the ~~ dead; and so it has become for me my own personal, peculiar quark of-twisted providence, the evidence of my-fait that all circles are not the same or brand entirely, nor an entity within themselves ... completely whole, because my experience has shown, that they too; given-the proper-vexing; like me ... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ can be broken. ~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~ ~~~~~~ ~~~~~~ ~~~~~~ ~~~~~~ ~~~~~~ ~~~~~~ ~~~~~~ ~~~~~~ ~~~~~~ ~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/22/2009 9:12:00 AM
Beautiful poem.
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Date: 4/12/2009 9:35:00 AM
James, nice shape and wonderful words. Congrauilations on your featured write this week. Ernilando
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Date: 4/9/2009 11:50:00 PM
In to my Favorite poem's list James - Excellent in every way and this is especially true in the shape layout - one of the better I have seen - Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week, God Bless, mj
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Date: 4/9/2009 7:53:00 PM
Nice shape. Great words. Congratulations on being featured this week. Always, Daneann
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Date: 4/9/2009 2:13:00 PM
creativeand thoughtful. jhl
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Date: 4/6/2009 8:19:00 PM
Very creative crafted..Unique write....Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week. GB, Always Tyesha"
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Date: 4/6/2009 4:39:00 PM
This is such a creative and artistic poem. Congratulations on having it featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 4/6/2009 12:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Awesome write and presentation. Love, Shar
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Date: 4/6/2009 12:16:00 PM
Great shape, congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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Date: 4/6/2009 7:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your Amazing poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/1/2009 2:56:00 PM
i love this tree of sadness and emotions,sounds like pain-love this poem
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Date: 4/1/2009 1:08:00 PM
A lovely write, very passionate and sad. Love the visual format. Smiles from Lolita
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