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Family Tree

Looking past and long ago trails of names come trickling down down they come through the annals of time their names defined neatly arranged, in staggered lines. Forgotten lists of greats and grands silent, as their memories stand in the past, immortal bands. Family trees are carefully writ down into the logs they go mothers, fathers reap and sow bearing children, they bestow offspring issued in straight rows. Trailing down to you and I here we love, we laugh, we cry living, breathing, this our lives mortal we, until we die adding to the rows inscribed.

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Date: 10/4/2024 5:38:00 AM
After Lincoln died, his secretary of war said "Now he belongs to the ages". This poem reminds me of the transition from our lives to a notation of organized names. Thanks for the poem
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Laura Leiser
Date: 10/4/2024 6:28:00 AM
Thank you, Mark! :)
Date: 9/14/2024 7:22:00 PM
A moving description of what the family tree is about, Laura -- nourishment flowing in both directions, from the roots up to the branches and back down again. :) Gershon
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/15/2024 7:55:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by to comment, Gershon. Glad you enjoyed this! :)
Date: 9/9/2024 6:31:00 AM
Dear Laura, I love a great family tree that speaks to names that have brought us to today. You have inked it so well into a Gem, and I often think that my wife and I need to continue to document that tree with stories that hopefully will unfold in time and generations. An excellent read! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/12/2024 3:22:00 PM
I recently read stories from my mom’s generational history which were so interesting! It inspired me to write this poem. Thanks always for your kind and supportive comments, Daniel! :)
Date: 9/8/2024 6:32:00 PM
Laura! how nice to connect with an old, sweet soupie friend and read this charming poesy about the dynamics of a generational tree ! Isn't this a double treat? you always amaze...huggs
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/12/2024 3:20:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by, Nette! I’m happy you liked this one! :)
Date: 8/23/2024 12:37:00 PM
Hi Laura! I am so happy I found this poetic gem today. Genealogy can tell us so much about ourselves but, as you point out, we can't hear our ancestors laugh or see them smile, hear their voices or their thoughts. We see the work of their hands and wonder! I love this poem. Sending you blessings of summer joy!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/1/2024 6:55:00 PM
Thank you, Sam, for your kind and encouraging comments! You are such a gem! Hugs! :)
Date: 8/20/2024 12:25:00 PM
its fascinating research doing one's family tree, my maternal grandfather wrote the family tree dating back to about 1790 if not earlier. hugs Jan xx
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/20/2024 6:58:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by to comment, Jan! I hope all is well with you!
Date: 8/20/2024 11:49:00 AM
Great one, both sad and profound. Each life lived and then forgotten, but not by God. We should stop and think and be the best of our line.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/20/2024 6:56:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by and commenting, Kim! Ive been thinking a lot about family lately, especially since my sister died in June.

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