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" Charmaine "

1 " A thorn in my Heart "
     " Feeling their pain, deep : Indeed "
     " Touched my Heart and Soul "  ( Charmaine Chircop )

   2  I thought to myself
       How can I help Haiti
      "Touch their Heart and Soul"  ( HG )

 Dedicated to the "Malta Princess" Charmaine Chircop

Author's Note : The First Senryu is Charmaine's Words in a Comment To my POEM
                                                 " MIATIANNA "
                                 The Second Senryu is My Response

Copyright © Hgarvey Daniel Esquire | Year Posted 2010

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Doris Culverhouse Date: 2/10/2010 5:22:00 AM great job Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 1/30/2010 3:02:00 AM Thanks my dear brother ,friend,chef:)..tnks for using my comment,and i can see from a simple comment of an amateur,you ve created a senryu and you ve created more love to our Haitan brothers and sisters,It is a thorn in my Heart,knowing how many left family behind,how many dont have a bed,a shelter, how many ended up alone,It breaks my heart,knowing nothing can soothe their pain..Your words are pearls,Your Heart is as big as the Globe..thanks for being my friend...Charma Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 1/29/2010 10:03:00 PM Charmaine's comment reveals the love she shares with all. What a wonderful lady we are blessed to have on Poetry Soup. Very nice dedication, HG. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Raul Moreno Date: 1/29/2010 8:58:00 PM Your poetic heart is on fire, I am enjoyed your creative tributes...Raul Login to Reply