Beautiful Bees

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10th in Your Choice A Contest (Sponsor: Brian Strand)

Judged: March 16th, 2025

buzzing bees breed blooms, 

bearing beauty, banishing 

brutal barrenness

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Frances Schiavina

Date: 2/12/2025 9:50:00 AM

Uplifting poem contrasting bareness to sounds and colors of spring.

Trina Layne
Date: 2/12/2025 5:49:00 PM

Thank you.

Arlo Parker

Date: 12/26/2024 10:57:00 PM

No bees, no we's. Alliteration blitz, TL. Well crafted. :o))

Trina Layne
Date: 12/27/2024 10:53:00 PM

Appreciated.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/26/2024 6:48:00 AM

Lovely, Trina, with great alliteration!

Trina Layne
Date: 12/26/2024 4:35:00 PM

Thank you. Nature is always a great theme to work with.