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' a Snake In the Grass ... ' 19th Senryu

‘ A Snake In The Grass … ’ 19th Senryu A Snake In Tall Grass Strikes, Bites and Cruelly Laughs … ‘ Did It Hurt’ It Asp

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Tim Ryerson

Date: 10/14/2009 2:01:00 AM

Love this one, Moonbee... great last line! How 'bout some more senryus? (I asp) - Tim

Audrey Haick

Date: 9/28/2009 8:00:00 AM

Hey MoonBee, Even though I don't like snakes, I think this Senryu is great! Grateful for the humor also! Ladybug12

John Freeman

Date: 9/27/2009 5:42:00 PM

When I see snakes in the grass, I try to stand still and let them pass,I like your witty Senryu, God bless Moses

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 9/27/2009 9:32:00 AM

Hi MoonBee, very good senryu. That reminds me of the huge snake that I discovered in my grass. It's girth was almost 8", not sure what it was but it did't get a chance to bite. LOL Caryl

P Sheart

Date: 9/27/2009 5:02:00 AM

Hi MoonBee Youch, I can feel it ha! We don't have snakes here in Alaska but I know the lower 48 does. Watch out for them don't want cruelity to laugh....Wonderful Senyu. You have a way of making your poetry fun. Love reading you! Take care hun. Love Light Truth Patricia