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Orchestra In Sunset Skies

. Soft Wind Music play On last Harp Strings Of Sunrays Clouds waltzing in dance. Charma

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Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 2/25/2013 12:52:00 PM

Wonderful poem, describing the wonder of nature with such excellence. I'll try to come up with something good for you to read. So tickled that you are waiting!

Kurt Vella Petroni

Date: 8/3/2011 2:24:00 PM

Phil Boy

Date: 4/27/2010 9:22:00 AM

Sounds okay,(Baby boy)

Mitch White

Date: 4/25/2010 11:06:00 PM

So imaginative

James Fraser

Date: 4/22/2010 1:27:00 PM

Charmaine, this poem is incredibly beautiful >> James

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/22/2010 8:11:00 AM

I love looking at the world through your eyes, Charma. Wish we could watch the "clouds waltzing" together. Much love to my dear friend, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/21/2010 5:05:00 AM

I wish you a day of love, sunshine and inspiration beyond your wildest dreams Charmaine. Thank you for sharing your poetry today and you always kind comments. Love, Carol

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/21/2010 2:14:00 AM

WOW!!! I enjoyed this creative Haiku...very clever...Raul

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 4/20/2010 8:31:00 PM

Very lovely, Charma. Well written Haiku! Best wishes, Caroline.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/20/2010 7:48:00 PM

Soon to be Wednesday.. think this will be me soon.. soft wind music play.. oh yes... clouds waltzing in dance.. oh yes.. my own kind of dancing..luv.. enjoyed your beautiful lyrical words dear sweet friend Charma..luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/20/2010 3:33:00 PM

Great write...It takes me there...Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Marcus Crane

Date: 4/20/2010 3:31:00 PM

hey charmaine ..i really enjoyed reading this haiku ..after reading this i closed my eyes and i could hear the music play on these golden strings ..such a serene feeling this one brings along :) ..marco

Rick Parise

Date: 4/20/2010 10:28:00 AM

Very nice !! Great imagery , clouds are rolling in , music still so vivid in memory Blessings charma~~~~~Rick

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/20/2010 9:29:00 AM

Nice one ,,a wrap on this pic. have a good one .p.d.