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1st day of Autumn

rain falls swiftly hard uplifting spirits inside misty cold Fall breeze

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/22/2013 3:40:00 PM
SWEET AND BEAUTIFULLY WORDED
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Date: 9/26/2013 6:00:00 PM
Liam , I can imagine you have many poems Haiku style ..living in a Irish paradise. Thank-you , yvette
Date: 9/22/2013 12:36:00 PM
Hi Yvette, Short but very sweet autumn poem! Ken
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Date: 9/22/2013 2:30:00 PM
Thank-you Ken ! I have been passionately working and losing time posting new poems , entering contest . Much love , time to read yours !
Date: 9/22/2013 12:32:00 PM
- Fresh and crisp autumn air ... beautiful haiku, Yvette !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/22/2013 2:32:00 PM
Hello my friend ! I have changed my entries ..I am not sure if I am the only person whom does that ! I had "A nightmare on elm street entered ? And lost the contest ? Anyway , much love to you !