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1st Day of Autumn

rain falls swiftly hard uplifting spirits inside misty cold Fall breeze

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/22/2013 3:40:00 PM

SWEET AND BEAUTIFULLY WORDED

Shanity Rain
Date: 9/26/2013 6:00:00 PM

Liam , I can imagine you have many poems Haiku style ..living in a Irish paradise. Thank-you , yvette

Ken Carroll

Date: 9/22/2013 12:36:00 PM

Hi Yvette, Short but very sweet autumn poem! Ken

Shanity Rain
Date: 9/22/2013 2:30:00 PM

Thank-you Ken ! I have been passionately working and losing time posting new poems , entering contest . Much love , time to read yours !

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/22/2013 12:32:00 PM

- Fresh and crisp autumn air ... beautiful haiku, Yvette !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shanity Rain
Date: 9/22/2013 2:32:00 PM

Hello my friend ! I have changed my entries ..I am not sure if I am the only person whom does that ! I had "A nightmare on elm street entered ? And lost the contest ? Anyway , much love to you !