~ (~) ~ the Open Actions of a Sinner ~ (~) ~

~ (~) The true meaning I-am-I feel of a tiered heart the open actions of a sinner, God be Him as I believe undoubtedly I know He is; I pray He grant me mercy. (~) ~ ~ (~) Though time may further wither-placate beholden may His grace bring me the merry day I fall laying broken before His goodness. (~) ~ ~ (~) Shadows they play mid the Sun's subtle-and-ominous tones, freedom telling tells always of-more time... whether it be mordant, or by future tense that lay still dormant. (~) ~ ~ (~) Haven't any moneys to think of I could steel buy or borrow, leaving-someday-maybe- today... remembering time a treasure pleasure of the past present always possible-future — but open I am, though time my greatest teacher — is killing this pupil. (~) ~ ~ (~) Some softly woven-vibrantly-spoken words-mellow tones all of these I have given in my life, though now I pray truly they be virtuous. (~) ~ ~ (~) The body aches, the mind crying in its wake, tiered now I feel I have taken-endured enough, though I know death its-always-consuming me, before I go let its hope grant the light to see for another, let-my words be-final... genuine; undivided-and-bold. (~) ~ ~ (~) "Humbly, as I pray it would be for you, death; as I can only hope it would be with me... may it-move-to you sweetly... ." (~) ~ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VU_rTX23V7Q&feature=related

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