~ (~) ~ Making Love ~ (~) ~

"Rolled over one night, punched my wife right in the nose-yes... ." "Woke up in the morning grateful as it were, as yes I was... ." "Seeing blood on her pillow, immediately scared-being freaked-the hell-out yes I ran- stumbling down the stairs to-find her, worried yelling oh-my God!" "Found her she looked sore, angry she was by then started crying-yes... ." "I said baby hun-dear oh my-humming-bird-sweet cello mi-cielo little-queen what-happened... ?" "She said you punched me in your sleep, broke my nose!" ""I said hun ah what?" screaming, falling to my knees in front of her... !" "She said what the hell did I do, I'm undeserving of this abuse... !" "I said yea I know, can't think of anything either-yes-dear-heart... ?" "Hun I'm-so sorry, I love-you would-never intently I hope-you know — no I'd-never do something-anything yes... anything — so fragile-yes so-flagrantly insensitive even-if you did so... ?" "You know I have bad dreams-yes, dear-heart... ?" "You often hold me from picking on my face and eyes when I do-right... ?" Shaking her head yes, me wiping her tears-tasting them... . "Saying, hun as much as I can't blame you for crying over this, hope you don't blame me for what I cannot control as well... ?" Then she pulled me close, looking at me; began kissing wiping the tears poring as well by then out from my eyes-tasting them... . And as I tell it now as it is how it happened as such — then she took my hand walked me upstairs to bed — pushing the bloody pillow aside onto the floor, then we again began making love; to our song we gave each one for the other... ! Means your love is good for me... ! ""Makes me chuckle now still because this is just the exact ways my wife and me treat each other-today just like-little baby's when one-hurts the other-you-know... . As it should be with good friends-I-feel now-because she was-always-trying just-like this and in-every way-that she-could to prove-this principal-too, yes-to yes-teach-such a big old-baby- like me... and-yea; and as I try-as I do, me her-too... !"" "And as I tell you as-it is just how-it happened-she accepted my amiable; stirring-ever- growing and menial-apology, after we-both were spent as-it turned-out; we-continued right-on over to-the hospital... !" http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EPEDqeKXD3M

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Date: 11/23/2010 6:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in PD'S contest James. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/22/2010 4:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in this finr contest ...Sara
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Date: 11/21/2010 3:16:00 PM
Yes, it is a good contender in this worst contest!! congratulations on a well deserved win. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 11/21/2010 12:53:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, James
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Date: 11/21/2010 12:18:00 PM
Congrats James on your winning poem in P.D.'s contest for worst poem ever written.. hard to write something bad on the art of making luv..think u are too hard on yourself calling this one worst ... enjoy the win.. today.. and a Happy Thanksgiving too..luv..
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Date: 11/21/2010 11:06:00 AM
James ...congrats on win.......... Luv/Best wishes.......Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 11/21/2010 10:48:00 AM
James, congratulations on your success in Pd's contest
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